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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww kaiba and jou are so kawaii together and i cant wait to see the yami's reunited with their loves. update again soon!!
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I liked the fact of how nervous Mokuba became when he saw Jou and thought he got caught. Seto being concerned about Jou was a nice touch. Update soon.
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is love. Seriously. I want more. It's like a drug. XD
Especially since you have a good plot, and string a sentence together. Usually people hare gramatically correct, but it's sooooo boring, or good plot = extreme need of a beta. :)
That's why we love you. XDDDDDDD
Especially since you have a good plot, and string a sentence together. Usually people hare gramatically correct, but it's sooooo boring, or good plot = extreme need of a beta. :)
That's why we love you. XDDDDDDD
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how your story is going, and I hope it isn't too long before you update again. I know how daunting it can be, but please don't forget about it, I want to see how it ends.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting...is Malik's yami gone too? This chapter was longer (and I love long chapters). Keep up the good work.
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE I'M ADDICTED!!!!
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story really has me interested. Seto is so cute even when he's being slightly perverted. How do you do it?
What really surprised me about this story was how you have Katsuya as a slightly darker character than Seto. Bad boy, Katsuya! No sleeping around! ...ok, that was weird, even from me.
You write Ryou and Yugi so well, even when they're acting completely against their nature they aren't out of character. Cool.
Bakura is funny. Too bad Seto is too uptight to appreciate parvy humour. But then again, if I were in his shoes neither would I.
I hope the next chapter is coming up soon. Keep up the good work!
What really surprised me about this story was how you have Katsuya as a slightly darker character than Seto. Bad boy, Katsuya! No sleeping around! ...ok, that was weird, even from me.
You write Ryou and Yugi so well, even when they're acting completely against their nature they aren't out of character. Cool.
Bakura is funny. Too bad Seto is too uptight to appreciate parvy humour. But then again, if I were in his shoes neither would I.
I hope the next chapter is coming up soon. Keep up the good work!
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December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. The concept that Yugi and Ryou would lose their minds if separated from their yami's is interesting and I can't wait to see how Kaiba will be able to help them. More soon, please!
'Ko
P.S. LOVED that bit about Kaiba licking Jou!
'Ko
P.S. LOVED that bit about Kaiba licking Jou!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool!!!
UP DATE SOON!!!
UP DATE SOON!!!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is an excellent story! I can't wait to see what you have planned for them next. I feel sorry for the poor hikaris, but hopefully they'll have their loves back soon.
You've done an incredible job, especially if English isn't your first language - you're actually doing better than many english-speaking authors out there. Keep it up! I look forward to the next chapter.
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You've done an incredible job, especially if English isn't your first language - you're actually doing better than many english-speaking authors out there. Keep it up! I look forward to the next chapter.
:)