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for My life my pain

by cinque

person Rosebud
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I'm so glad you updated! ^^
I know this chapter was short, but it was sooooo good!
I was kind of hoping that Joey would tell them about being gay...all in good time I guess lol!
Well, I can't wait till the next chapter. Yami and Bakura are going to come back!!!!! (hopefully)
Please update soon!
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So much crying in this chapter...but it was good.
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far! Please continue with this, it is one of the best stories I've read in a long while.
person Rosebud
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I LOVE this story!
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon!
I can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a rather productive chapter. I like it so far.
person RandomPerson
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see the Yami's come back! Poor Yugi and Ryou...the relationship between Jou and Seto is interesting, if a little OOC, but who would have thought Mokuba and Shizuka culd be a couple? (I'm assuming they bare) Hating Yuki with a passion right now, so I hope he doesn't come up again and cause trouble. Anyway, please update soon, this is really quite interesting and I wanna know what happens next.
person Anesta-chan
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story so far! I can't wait to see how this advances and turns out. I bookmark this story and await an update. Soon, I hope.

-Anesta
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow cool Story but....*looks around* Where the fuck is the rest?

Marik: *snorts* She said a naughty word ^^

Bakura: *wacks Marik upside the head* Shuddup...baby *kisses*

Freddie: My virgin eyes

Oh get yourself laid...for Gods sake....

Freddie: *cries and rocks in a corner*

*sigh* Just one day in normality...Please?

Marik, Bakura and Freddie: Nah....

*nods* Wouldn't have it any other way anyway ^^
person Wickedwiccan
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG! that was sooooo cute!!! GAH!! MORE I WANT MORE!!!
person White Wolf Canius
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh... so cute.... I love your story so much, it makes me wanna huggle you and say your a good writer... but I won't cause it would probably scare the hell out of you...

but by all means continue. I REALLY wanna see what happens next.
~Canius