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for My life my pain

by cinque

schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg joey kissed kaiba *fangirl squeal* i hope you update the next chapter quicker than this one
person girlo
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
short... :( those two pirits had best not mess anything up! OR ELSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Dies*
How can you leave it off there?!?! I truly hate cliffies!!! But I guess it works...
So happy Yami and Bakura were able to come back! Makes me wonder though..... What sort of "evils" was Ra talking about? And there wasn't much description on what would happen to Seto (*Cough*Jou*Cough*) should something happen.
Can't wait for more!!!!!!
~KS
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now everyone has they're happy ending...well almost everyone. That was short and sweet!
person Rosebud
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bakura and Yami are back, and Jou kissed Seto!!! =)
Awesome chapter!
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
btw Isis cracks me up; I can so picture her being like that...poor Otogi!
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Joey can never say what he wants to say. Great chapter.
person YaoiLover16
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is awsome and I love it!!! I hope to read more soon!!!

YL16
person Rosebud
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY, you updated!
I loved this chapter. But poor Jou, will he ever get a chance to tell Seto how he feels without someone interrupting lol.
The moment that you had at the end was really sweet too; how they gave each other a kiss on the forehead...*grins* I hope that they get together soon.

Can't wait to read more!
person girlo
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor babies! they just need a little loving...
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww you can soo see where this is going, yay please let the there be kaiba smut soon >_<