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This chapter is LOVE <3

So totally bogus. SETO WANTS TO KISS ME SO BAD... he does. Really. XDD

What exactly will Yugi and Ryou's chapter consist of? They're in comas right?

Have Jou and Seto meet first. I think the hospital is a good place to start. Maybe not inside but outside they could be going in at the same time. And anyone who would hurt Seto that way makes me mad. Jou can really help him heal in more ways than one. If you do bring back the Yami's do it gradually. Putting Yugi and Ryou together at first is a great idea. But I don't know about them as a couple. They loved their Yami's too much. Maybe a simple kiss will spark the memory enough to bring them back. Maybe at first like a memory and then in a dream sequence. You can go from there. Love this premise. Update soon.

You make Seto so human in this chapter...its has a unique taste....maybe with him being "human", you could have it where he helps bring back the Yamis for Yugi and Ryou? Really like the story....catti

UWAAAH!! Actually, so far all I have read is the little thingy you wrote at the top; before you started, and I love you so much already. XDDDD

hugs and hearts and love. <3

YAY! I just finished reading the first chapter, and it has me baying for MORE!

Your English is perfectly fine, for all that I can see. XDDD LOVE OF YOU AND YOUR STORY [with more grammatical correctness than other people who only speak english ;) ]

DFIJLBGNSBLKNHG Put them back together again. Please. For the sake of their fragile little hearts.
Or they'll become emo. XD I loved this new edition. Seto = HOTT btw. :) Please update soon.

I'm watching you... :|

It least it's easy to tell that you are going somewhere with this. I think you're doing well! keep it up.

wow...i really like your story, i never saw a fic where Ryou and Yugi just lost it a little, but i'm glad that their together ^_^ they are so cute, same as Otogi and Honda. Now for the question...where is Seto? and how come he's not humping his puppy? u_u....need puppyshipping..oh and update soon...i love that pair their my fav.. Great job with your story

I found your story interesting. You have mapped out the lives of some of the characters beautifully. Jou doing the narration is great. I like POV's. If you do decide to continue one way to bring Seto into this is have Jou run into him in a night club. You should also think about the healing process for Yugi and Ryou. You have a sense on where you want to go with this I can see it. As for spelling and Grammar get someone who is adept in English to help you there. Spell check doesn't always pick up misspelled words, especially if the word you are using is spelt correctly. I am not flamming you. So take all this into consideration. For your first story you are doing good. So update soon.