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July 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM
So little words but so much tension. I liked the story very much. Good work! I I personally think that there should definately be a sequel. One with Aster somehow spilling the truth unwillingly and Zane geting his hands on him yet again. But this time confining him with himself and taking a sexual aproach.
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June 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It would be interesting if something happens to Zane and Phoenix had to safe him or something.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
write more to it! please!
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was seriously dementingly great. I love the inside look at what zane really could be....there should most definatly be a sequel.....ebvil ideas are popping up. But I'll keep them to myself less you wish to hear them at soem time.
Laters.
Laters.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! When are you going to update? And has Ryo finally realized that he loves Aster Pheonix? Will Aster fall for Ryo? PLease let me know SOON!
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sick, twisted, love.
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yey, this story rocks! I just absolutely love Zane/Aster, and this is one of the few stories of this pairing I've seen, so yeah. You rock! Love the interactions between Zane and Aster in this one, and great job keeping Aster in character. It's rare reading a slashfic where the characters are in-character, but you do a great job. I love it!
Basically...what I'm trying to say is WRITE MORE! Please. :D
Basically...what I'm trying to say is WRITE MORE! Please. :D
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are crazy, twisted, and cynical. please continue, you are doing a very good job.