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In short, I loved it. I' am not going to nag that it should have an ending, but I think the work is so good that it deserves one. I have always favored Mai and Tea as a pairing, and I enjoyed the use of an S/M situation to stimulate their relationship. It had body, and dare I say...soul (gasp!). I hope that when the inspiration strikes again, this story will be completed. Yeah for Muses!!!

I just took a look at the hits counter and OMG IT'S OVER 9000!!!!!!! Mabye we can celibrate with a new chapter? Hope to read more of this charming story eventually. a fan

This is a great yuri story, one of the best ive seen. Hope to see more in the future. Keep up the great work

Yay, a cliffhanger in a story that aparently is not updated very often! My favorite... Anyhow.

Congratulations. This is the only F/F story I've been able to find in this fandom I actually enjoy. The virtual reality thing, a little weird, but it works. I loved the line you had about pain costing extra. The ammount of thought and detail you've put into this little background piece of information is amazing.

But more than that, I think you're writing's hypnotic. I couldn't possibly explain to you why, but it's smooth, and compelling, and it just draws in you in. Not in a 'heart racing, I need to know what happens next' kind of way, but in a 'I think I could read this forever' kind of way. You're very talented, and I can only hope you find the desire and inspiration to continue.

I'm going to bugger off now and go check out some of your other work.

Hi there,

At the day I fond your story I just had to reed all 5 chapters twice. And the whole next day I could not stop thinking about it. It's just great. Keep going!

I'd realy like to read more about the harpies, dominating Tea and Mai at the same time.
Ishizu, as a kind of story teller, is an greate idea! Her smal paragraph realy made me lust for more.

Greetings
Juy Juka

PS: Sorry for my bad English spelling, I'm from Germany.

Whoa, intense, I enjoyed that immensely. The whole Master/Pet idea revolving around the Harpies & Mai is quite original. Mai/Anzu, not original, but the blend is right, fire and water make for an interesting combination (In the metaphsyical sense if you follow me.)

I do have.. a few reservations though.

Mai & Anzu moving in together... hm, I like it, but it... it seems, contrived for lack of a better word. It has no flow to it within the paramitars of the story. I would have kept them apart, it makes it more... unusual.

Introducing Ishizu, this... I have to say, i don't like. I'm sorry if that insults you, I just don't. I think the story would be better if the central characters were just Anzu, Mai & The Harpies. Hey, it's your story I'm just stating an opinion. I will say though I'm slightly predujiced, I'm not a big Isis fan. Serenity, Anzu, Mai, they're my favourite girls in YGO (Anzu in particular.)

I can understand how you feel, being a writer on FF.net myself I've had occasion to want to throw it in. My interest started waining a while ago as well, then I found the Manga and DAMN does it kick ass compared to that stupid excuse for a dub.

Anyway, I enjoyed your story, I won't say please continue, all I will say is that, if you choose to update, I'll keep my eye out.

Later,
Linkin-Phoenix

I really need to travel outside of your Game section more often. Can not belive I missed this one. Fantastic work.

Hey you should have them upgrade there subscriptions, so that you can have them do more

This story is great I wish I'd found it sooner hope for an update

The Sexy Slave Tia

Wow that chapter was great I hope that I was'nt one of the reviewer's that aws whiny and got on your nerves but i rerally look forward to an update this is a great story and there are not enough yuri on this site.

With Love;Imasuky Lomae