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-_-; Pegasus kept doing things throughout the story that I hated, but forgave him for. >_< He just did that so much that by the time he forced him to go down the water slide I freaked out and almost punched my computer... >.> since then I have REALLY, REALLY, hated him.

Dartz will be the same, I'm sure. >.> I was mad last chapter because he put Marik with Constantine. Then I forgave him for not making Ryou a whore, and now I hate him again for letting Constantine do those horrid things to Marik... I'm pretty sure that I'll forgive him again... >.> maybe...

Aww, but it's so hard NOT to kick them in the crotch! >.> *struggles not to kick Constantine in the crotch, but does so in the end*

^_^ lol, Malik is so cute! <3 That whole scene was adorable... >.> ...except the het sex. >_<

I read this right after I finished watching Rent and I'm so totally depressed now it's not funny. I hope something good happens for someone soon... It was a good break from finals though. More soon, please.

awwww!!! :'( poor ryou. poor poor ryou. he deservs love. how could dartz let that happen to the one ryou loves if he likes ryou. awsome chappie tho. cant wait for the next

Well then, nice fluke. Just look up Dartz online under the show title and the episodes that he appears in then watch them on youtube.com in you spare time. My recomendation to keep him real.

I was honestly crying out of frustration for Marik and Ryou. I *really* love this! I can't wait for things to get better. More soon!

Wow I lucked out read chapter 13 and I still want more. And while I feel sorry for Tuck and Nod at the same time I just want to take them aside and explaine to them that no one ever listens to their friends when love comes into play. I can't bring myself to hate Dartz though...I dont know why maybe beccause he's like a stupid child that was never tought right from wrong?

awwww poor Marik. poor Ryou too. and tuc and nod. Tuc is right, poor thing just trying to protect his best friend. i feel so sorry for marik tho having to go threw that. cant wait till the next chappie!!!!
jennie

Why are they so mean to Marik..? *hunts down Dartz and kicks him in the crotch then finds Constantine and kicks him in the crotch* But I still like them both WAY more than Pegasus...

T_T Poor Ryou! *huggles him* You guys really like to torture him... it seems that Ryou's never happy... T_T

Actually, with the SetoxYami, thing, I was meaning if you'll write about them outside of the Menagerie... but still in the story... you've been very focused on Ryou and Marik, not that that's a bad thing... T_T But SetoxYami was what kept me from writing several fics in which Pegasus died horrible, pain filled, deaths... *grumbles* Hate him so much... *grumble*

AWESOME! I'm waiting for the next chapter!

gasp! what a horrible way to end a chapter! i can't believe marik is going to be all submissive and crzy now! plz update soon, i can't wait!