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for Twilight Menagerie

by hatochiisai

person e.t.c.
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MERRY CHRISTMAS!
The story's going along great! :D
person demonchilde4
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww poor things! poor ryou. poor marik. dartz is an ass. wtf is he doing hurting bakura?! :'( :cuddles bakura::poor baby
person yunasgrace
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really do love your story and this is nothing against yur story but even i have to admit that ryou is getting too whiney, i dont see why dartz is trying so hard. and i dont really understan whats tuc's problem coz hes bsically been raising Ryou anyway so officially becoming his parent wont change much.
i loved the part where Bakura was hearing Spunky talk XD
now everyone officially thinks hes lost the plot... maybe Rafel hit bakura on the head a few to many times ^^

cant wait for another chappie
yunasgrace
person Camille
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the conversation between the rabbits. HAHAHAHAH!! That was great! When is Seto going to finally find them?
person foxxy foxx
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories, keep writing please!!!
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*twitch* I will refrain from kicking Dartz... XO

Dartz and Constantine really need to grow hearts... and maybe brains too... they're just such JERKS! XO

Poor Marik and Ryou; they need hugs... and kisses... and some kind of weapon so they can gain some sort of upper hand on those jerks! XO

... I wonder if Bakura really was halucinating... lol

Merry Christmas!
person demonchilde
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor marik. poor ryou. what is he gonna do the eggs he took from nod?! omg i cant wait till the next chappie ::bounces excited:: well awsome chappie!!!
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't need to kick anyone this chapter... (that doesn't mean I don't want to) ^_^ But I can give Amelda a hug! *hugs him* And Yami and Seto are so awesome!

Um... I don't fear water slides. I got angry because Pegasus forced him to go down and then laughed while Ryou cried... Then there was probably other stuff that I had yet to forgive him for... If I do end up liking Pegasus I'll probably end up hating someone else...

Marik needs a big hug! I'm very happy that Ryou has forgiven him! Maybe now Ryou will put less of his trust in Dartz..? *cough* It's not going to happen... is it..?

D: Uh oh... what's Daisuke planning..?
person RaveEchidna
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn it how can you leave it like that! Nooo! Any way I still like Dartz some how but the dark lion needs to die really really die.
person Silverwolfe
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh noo!!! I feel so sorry for Marik and Ryou! Everything gets in the way of them being together!! And are we gonna find out whats going on between Yami and Seto soon? We miss them XD