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well i feel terrible for not reviewing a lot. i love ur stories and ur writing is excellent. i log online every week just to check if you updated ur story. you are very good at the characters, and i see that you don't follow the Mary Sue. WONDERFUL! i can't wait for the next update. i hope it goes better with the writing. by the way, is Yami going to be caught with a tracking device, like he planned? Or Seto going to have to lock him up. i wouldn't put it past Yami if he did it by himself without Seto's help. he is stubborn. that's probably why Yami is one of my favorite characters. But i'm starting to like Ryou in this story. He is gaining courage and drifting slightly from his innocent rabbit side, but he still has a long way to go. i can't wait to see what ryou comes out looking like after this transformation. i bet i won't be surprised with ur writing skills.
keep up the good work, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Noo bad Dartz but I still dont hate him I just hope he sees what he is doing is wrong. And well I still dont like the dark lion. Tuck and Nod are too damned cute and I love how they've be come Ryou's parents.

Woo!! A new chapter for christmas, that was the best present ever!! Oo well, it would have been if it didn't make me angry and want to kill Dartz for being so mean to...well...all the hybrids XD That bastard!! *huff* He's worse than Pegasus was!! It's weird, Pegasus and Dartz would be one of my favourite pairings (If I ever saw someone that had done a ff of it) but when I read this, or it's prequal I cant help really hating them XD I really wanted to kill Pegasus in Jungle, and he's my favourite YGO bishie XD You just write so damn well and convincingly, you should run for president...of...something Oo

Poor Ryou, he doesnt get a break, but maybe those new rabbit genes might make him less naive. I'm SO glad he's finally twigged that Dartz is a bad guy XD that bunny really frustrates me sometimes.

Something bad should happen to Rafel...something really bad...*ponders*

*glompage* I love your ff's! Please keep writing!!!

More rabbit? I can't wait to see how he is now. I keep feeling like things are hopeless for them. This chapter is wonderful and I can't wait for more!

'Nod! We're rabbits! And he's... well... he's... MOSTLY human!!!' Tuc whined. 'And he's like... FIFTY times our size!!!'
Oh, I like this line. XD XD Thats' so cute. I can totally see Tuc spazzing going "but..but...but...HE'S SO BIG!!!!!><><><" i LOVED THAT LINE. it was way too adorable.

Poor Ryou, but I'm glad that Tuc and Nod are taking care of him. Where is Petgasus, anyway? Do they know tat he used to belong to Pegasus? If they don't, it'd be awesome if Pegasus just 'came in' to 'enjoy' himself and saw Ryou through those pane glass windows...or 2 way mirrors or something...Iono, Dartz is pretty powerful, but Pegasus was pretty awesome in teh last fic...T_T I want Pegsy back!!! I want Pegsy to help Ryou again!!!! T_T ...Someone needs to kick Dartz in the groin...

'Nod! We're rabbits! And he's... well... he's... MOSTLY human!!!' Tuc whined. 'And he's like... FIFTY times our size!!!'
Oh, I like this line. XD XD Thats' so cute. I can totally see Tuc spazzing going "but..but...but...HE'S SO BIG!!!!!" i LOVED THAT LINE. it was way too adorable.

Poor Ryou, but I'm glad that Tuc and Nod are taking care of him. Where is Petgasus, anyway? Do they know tat he used to belong to Pegasus? If they don't, it'd be awesome if Pegasus just 'came in' to 'enjoy' himself and saw Ryou through those pane glass windows...or 2 way mirrors or something...Iono, Dartz is pretty powerful, but Pegasus was pretty awesome in teh last fic...T_T I want Pegsy back!!! I want Pegsy to help Ryou again!!!! T_T ...Someone needs to kick Dartz in the groin...

long time no read, and i'm upset i've missed so many good things, i can't to see what happens next. Update soon i promise to read it!!

Nice!! Keep writing. I loved The Jungle and I'm lovin' Twilight Menagerie!

MERRY CHRISTMAS!
The story's going along great! :

MERRY CHRISTMAS!
The story's going along great! :D