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for Twilight Menagerie

by hatochiisai

schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No! Don't leave him with Pegasus! T~T . . .though I guess, since he punched Dartz, he's not so bad.

XD I'm very happy they were rescued! *glomps Zaine* But now I'm really worried for Marik... I knew their problems would only continue.
person Drago
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hopw Marik gets the help he needs. Please keep writing!
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GO SETO! XD You can escape that evil nurse and save Yami and the others! WOOHOO!

Hmm... wow, Pegasus was actually useful..! I have very little desire to hit him.

I'm really liking Syrus and his clingy-ness too! *huggles for him*

And... you can't be serious..! Someone louder than Yami..? XD lol
person lokivsanubis
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story even though i'm really getting sick of Ryou no offense he's just so lacking of common sense and other things like that. But GO Seto Go. he acts like a five year old and the nurse is like a really bad version of a hostile nanny. But GO for the rescue team. now maybe Marik won't go insane and they can adopt Syrus as his and Ryou's baby or something assumign Ryou doesn't die for real or anything.
person K.E.Y.
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHH EMM GEEZ. GO KAIBA! You Run From that bitch XD.
person miku
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To the Kaiba-Mobile! Hahahaha xxxx Another exelent chapter. Are they going to raid both brothels simultaniously?
person Drago
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go Seto Go! Yay! For once Seto and Pegasus are the good guys!!! They are my two fav charaters.
person meijimistress
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurry go and save all the hybrids. run seto run!!! please keep updating. i love all of these stories.
person limpet666
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Weekends it is!! *waits happilly* I loooooooove this story!

Nyaw! poor poor Marik, that Constantine needs a good kick in the head! I really really hard one! *huff* But hey! Things are defo looking up now, I hope Zaine tells Marik Ryou's still alive, as much as the bunny annoys me.

XD It's funny, there's a line in this chapter that goes something like 'I was 19. Younger than you are now' and it sounded EXACTLY like something out of 'Interview with the Vampire'. It made me grin.

(You prob get this all the time with people asking for their fave charries, but is Shadi gonna make an appearance? I'm just curious ^^; )

*glompage**gives cookies* I cant wait for your next update!!!
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES! It's about time someone did something! XD I actually forgot about Zaine... O-o;

And I found myself chanting 'kill him' when Marik attacked Daisuke and later when he attacked Constantine... -_-; I really wish horrible pain on them. They're all so mean to poor Marik! *grumbles*