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for Twilight Menagerie

by hatochiisai

person e.t.c.
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful fanfic that keeps getting better and better!!!!
person e.t.c.
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story!
Bravo!
ENCORE ENCORE!
lol haha
person yunasgrace
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im sry. ive been reading ur story but i havnt been reviewing. i really like the way the story is going, i personally think that ryou is becoming more trouble then he is worth ^^. in the jungle he basically turned his friends against him and now hes doing the same. i know hes been through a lot but i think if he opened his eyes and trusted his friends then he wouldnt be in nearly as much trouble.
i also cant believe that Dartz let diasuke(hope i spelt it right) alter Mariks attitude... i think it would be funny if dia was turned into a hybrid in the end and kept as some pet. it would teach him a valueble lesson! XD

well cant wait for another chappie, good luck
yunasgrace
person meijimistress
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update again soon. i really love this story and cant wait to see more. i hope marik makes it out ok he is one of my favorite characters in this story. i really love all the discriptions and details that you write into your stories. i love them all.
please update!
person Rei
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very good, i love ur storys, please update soon.
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*waves* Here I am, reviewing, just like I said I would on Tales of Arabian Nights! Wah! Poor Marik! *huffs* It's getting hard for me to read this a lot of the time. I try to avoid depressing things and this is definately one of them right now! Oh well. I'll stick with it anyways. Though I'm sure it will get worse before it gets better... it always does. *sobs*

Good writing though, keep it up!
person lokivsanubis
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! I can't wait until they met again. update soon.
person MewMew2
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kawaii deso! Cute! I throughly enjoed reading this chapter very much, it seemed to be filled with humaor and fluff 2 things which I'm definitly in the mood for right now. you just made my day. Thank you!
person lokivsanubis
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the mind games. Update soon!
person lokivsanubis
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay i'm loving the story. i love dartz's character he's somewhat more jadded then pegasus was but now what do we do? All our sexy hibrids have been taken and about to be sold off. Oh well at least the rabbits are somewhat safe, even though i don't trust Rafel's character. Update soon!