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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story was amazing and you felt for Kaiba and Jou...nice work
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this quite a bit ... ok, I'm lying, I like it a LOT. I love the fact that you focused on emotions, and brushed past the lemony bits quickly, in flashback. ~ I think this is where your strength as a writer is, in grounding a story in concrete details, in genuine emotions. ~ Many other authors grind out the same old boring generic "one finger, two fingers, blow job, blah blah" :p ~ you give us STORIES.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another great story. of all of the joey is a drunk fics i've read this is the best. i truly felt the angst and love of the stalker (seto).
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* SO SAD...beautiful but heart wrenching. Okay, my muses and I are all sobbing. Darn it, more tissues.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah that's so sad, but a reality for so many people. Loved it, a truly emotional piece.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very well written.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story. It shows that bitterness can take root if you're not careful, and that you can truly overcome that same bitterness if enough effort is put forth. It amazes me you always seem to pull out a winning story at the last minute. I will look forward to see what you do for the Halloween challenge coming up next on DL. Please post more of your stories.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...wow. That was.. so very well done. The tone was so somber and fitting for what had happened, and you portrayed everyone in their grief believably. It was really touching. I'm glad things worked out for everyone, but they'll still never forget what happened, or the people. I can't say how much I like this fic. Great job.
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**eyes all misty** If you were trying to make me all cry-face... then you succeeded! T.T This was an awesome story, heartfelt, and moved me. I really aplaud how you wrote this story. It was very well written. T.T Now if you'll escuse me... I need some tissues!
~ChibiRinni ^_^
~ChibiRinni ^_^
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September 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sad, but bittersweet ^^ Lovely fic.