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for Gettin' Bi Mai

by MizumiBlu

person Velvetina
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**Glomps** I'm sorry I've been bad and not reviewed. But illness haunts me all the frickin time but I'm feeling a whole lot better now and so reluctantly part with sexy Seto so that you may have him back again. **Sniff** Thanks for the loan he was wonderful!

Dang, Seto kicked Mai's ass in this chapter and that is what I like to see **Winks** but oh my lord is Jou clueless or what? Seriously how thick can one guy be...wait he's a guy and a blonde says it all!

I feel so sorry for the drummer **pout** forgotten how to spell name. Unrequited love bites ass...but you'll give him a happy ending right? Anyway I hope I'm forgiven for missing a review!

Velvetina xx
person Neptune
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would have already slapped her, seriously. The rules say "Dont hit a lady" but I've never considered a bitch a lady. ^^

Keep up the goodwork! And hurry up and update your other story or no White Mage for you!
person SilverCrescentX (not logged in)
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry i haven't been reviewing i have been reading it so sorry sorry sorry!!!! onegai!!!! forgive me!!! i love it but i will kick jou's ass if he doesn't admit his love to my darling blue eyes!
update woman!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me- ooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooo fighT!
seto- oh god, she's lost it.
me- well duh, mai's lost it.
seto- no i ment you.
me- oh yes, i'll have to talk to you off the reviews sometime. blast that work schedual of mine.
jou- anyway, dis is gonna be a big mess, i can feel it.
seto- no duh it's going to be, baka inu
jou- i ain't no damn bird. ><
me- o.O anyway, no worries for rushing now, update when you can. <3
person hitori
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i'm sorry i didn't review for the last chapter! i wasn't around, and didn't know if you had updated or not. =^-^= anywayz! this chapter was awsome, as usual, and i LOVED how seto made mai loose her cool! so bad ass!

anywayz, bad ass chapter girl, and yes i agree with you...it was a very LONG week..i'm still feeling the affects of it now. well gotta go, please update soon!
person Drachenaugen
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I feel for Seto, Kuroki and Satoru T_T They all suffer in their own way. Jou has lots of fixing, thinking and choosing to make, and he better get to it.
My personal favorite was the Seto-Mai bit. Go Kaiba! He’s so wonderfully mean when he wants to *glomps*. And Jou stopped her just in time, he is starting to atone bit by bit but still, I feel Seto is going to get hurt no matter what, so sad T_T
Now, my question is, how are the sleeping arrangement going to be in this tour? Lol, I’m sure Mai will not be allowed to stay with Jou, but where oh where will sweet Seto end up?
Great chapter Mizu, keep the good stuff coming please!
person anessa
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS is what I hate! I hate it when someone leaves a cliffy, but this chapter is very good, in itself, very much enjoyed it, thanks a lot for the update as ya can see...Im to tired to scream. Update soon =)
person girlo
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all, Snakes on a Plane was a hilariously awesome movie. Secondly, poor kaiba must be hurting something awful! I understand where he's coming from, but still... i feel really bad for him. Lastly, Jou's an idiot. That is all. keep up the good work
person Shadow2007
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:D This story is GREAT! :P Sorry it took me so long to read it(I honetsly thought it was going to be some disgusting 3 some with Joey, mai and Seto........(ick)! Joey is an idiot and Mai is a bitch! Poor seto T_T
person Samantha Kaiba
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kaiba seems interested to get this to the next level but no everyone else and about time Mai got what she deserves....update soon