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Hurrah for Jou, finally telling Mai the way it is. I loved the look on Seto's face when Jou stepped in to stop Mai. And oh that kiss and him playing around with Seto's zipper. Got to love it. Satoru needs to get a clue Seto likes Jou and he has for a long time. I can't wait for the next chapter to see if sleeping arrangements gets settled. It would be a good idea to let Seto decide. After all its him they are fighting over. Update soon.

This is soo funny- and GOOD. poor Seto caught in the middel of two guys fighting over him and he's cluless.
It's a really great story and i like reading it. I just hope that you update fast, 'cause I can't seem to get enough of this. Keep up the exelent work.

What is Jou thinking he can be such an idiot at times. I dont blame Seto for being mad. If he thinks this is going to put him into Seto good graces he has a long way to go. As for Mai I bet she will eat this up and really put the screws to Jou. I dont know who to feel more sorry for Seto or Jou. Update soon.

seto- -___- you're a moron
mai- >> he's an idiot and a moron
seto- o.O well...yeah
mai- choosing you over me
seto- -___- and i thought we were getting somewhere
me- OMG CAT FIGHT! xD it's gonna be another big one folks! could almost be as famous as the Seto vs Shizuka fight way back when
me- oh, mizumi, onegai, update

ohh no!

Omfg Jou is such a MORON!! xD!!! Omg!! I cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Girl, I was getting worried about you! Thought maybe something bad had happened *sighs in relief* I’m glad to see you on the net again.

Wow, 2 updates at once! And Cradle will also be updated like that? *glomps Mizu* You didn’t have to do that Mizu, but I’m sure all the fans are overjoyed, I sure am. Ah yes, I was right in thinking that the sleeping arrangements where going to be a fun problem lol, love the whole thing to bits. And that sexy hot scene in chap 6 *fans herself* I find Joey tendency to let hand wonder under cloth (even underwear) veeeery amusing ;) Hope to see more of that soon. And the jealousy attacks are priceless.

Btw, I saw you started posting you fics on ‘Little Dagon’ yahoo! group. Can I also suggest you visit ‘A_Dragons_Lair’ also on Yahoo? While LD is oriented to various YGO couples (which is nice too), ADL is specifically a J/S & S/J group (well, them as the main couple of the stories). Plus, I’ve seen authors post their fics on both groups and get reviews from different users, so you could do that too. I’d love to see you in ADL, it would be loads of fun. Try to check it out, you won’t regret it ;) *uses her convincing puppy eyes*

Anyway, great job after the long wait Mizu! Keep the good stuff coming!

Note: I noticed I made a serious typo mistake on my last Cradle review. I wrote "I know you’re now cruel enough to kill the baby" and what I meant is "I know you're NOT cruel enough...". Very big and bad mistake on my part, sorry T_T

I was so nervous, i thought I missed an update, cause of the two chapters. But you just did a double update, so I'm releived. Anyway, Jou is a moron! Why on earth would he do that? Does he have no sense???? Well, I guess we all know that he doesn't, but still. Now poor Kaiba will have all this attention focused on him aswell and they'll have to do all sorts of crazy things together. I haope the Drummer and the guitarist get together. Keep up the excellent writing!

LOL! Count on Jou to pull a stunt like that. I wonder if the band will survive at this rate.

Thanks!!!!! Every day I had been checking for updates for this story, I love the way it's going. Please update soon, it's great the way J is starting to feel for s (maybe he felt like that that last day of school before mai got in the way?) and give more hell to mai.