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Wow, that was certainly amazing. The scenario itself is enough to draw me in, but the way you described it; they way you prodded the plot forwards... well, that's even better. I'll be keeping an eye on this one. Update soon, 'kay? Your Mai annoys the hell out of me, but I'm more than willing to put up with it if only I get more of your Seto. (:

One more (tiny, nitpicky) thing: your epithets are killing me. Sometimes I can't tell who is talking, who is doing this action, etc., because you substiute the characters' names for other phrases. It's hard enough for me to learn the names of the characters--and I really don't pay attention to their physical descriptions--and when you say 'strawberry blonde', it takes me a while to recognize who you're referring to.

where are you damn it.............i'm really angry.......update for yoreself for us for thge good of the world......for peace.......for beauty.........for love........for....ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....i could send you to other world if i ever found you....

Ja jajajajaja

This is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't know who is more stupid, Ma for being so blind or Jou for being so naive...

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anyway, I'm here reading you with eternal joy

you know you're right!!!!!!!

AHHHH! THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!! lol i was actually going to ask you to be my beta for a story i'm doing. it means alot to me that you like my reviews. i always aim to make the writter feel good about themseleves as much as i can. i'm gonna email you asap....now to the story. LMFAO i can not give enough of this awsome story!! it's so funny! and do i sense jou's jelousy? and that stupid minded bitch of a mia. eh. can't stand her. this must be so much fun bashing her. lol.

you know.I don't know why youre not updaiting but if youre not dead by now...please continue this story........it's stuck to my mind and ive been checking on it evry day.if you want to keep peoples mind busy trust me there are many other ways.just look at all the compliments youre getting....and i personally think you should write a book or something you can make aliving out of this but you should update honey ....i wanna see where it goes and i'm tierd of other bulshits i've been reading in(latest) i wanna read this fic but i don't know where has irrisponsible writer gone to?.........if you don't want to go on maybe you shouden't hav started cause i'm not letting you get away with this one.......

:( You kind of ruined it by saying who Seto's going to room with at the end. No I wouldn't know any gay clubs ... sorry........ I've never even been to Sydney -_- cause I live in WA *shrugs* OOOO you know I love a jealous Katsuya hehe. But anyway please do update soon but I understand that life can seriously suck at times but no doing any stupid stuff ok? YA HEAR ME! And by stupid stuff I meaning excessive drinking or smoking, taking of drugs, driving recklessly, suicide attempts, self mutilation, suicidal thoughts, shoplifting, theft, murder or arsonery ok?

I was about to forget about you please update faster....youre trying to kill people here........i don't like waiting..and god it's gonna get to somewhere good just open jou's goddamn eyes how can he not see seto love him this much?.......you better update in 3 days or i'ts youre funeral..........love youre wok........K

Well done...the past few chapters have been great and I cant believe Jou just told everyone like that...Seto is going to be pissed...but I guess Jou just really likes Seto deep down and even though he doesnt see it right now he wants the whole world to know....:-) update soon

I find the situation totally stupid sorry to say but it is, hope you update soon:D

This is a great story! And thanks for the double chapters!