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for Gettin' Bi Mai

by MizumiBlu

person hitori
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*glomp* wow girl! this is an awsome plot! it really great! i can't wait to read more!

and i feel sorry for seto, when i was reading that part i was like "AWWWWWWWW!! POOR SETO! its ok...you can always warm MY bed!" lol ttyl! ^_~
person Drachenaugen
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a totally different turn from your previous AU. Completely unexpected Mizu, this is great. I must say, I can't even imagine where this story is going, but I'm sure you have some major twist under your sleeve.

My dear Seto was badly wounded by such careless actions T_T Sure they weren't intentional, but hell, Jou deserves to get a bit of he's own medicine. He should totally have to endure seeing the CEO kissing someone else and being jealous about it (I just love your jealous Jou dear, can't help it). Also, I can't really figure out if Jou still loves Mai or what. It doesn't seem like he's too certain yet, he just knows he's not happy.

My dear, like always you deliver, great job and keep the good stuff coming please :3

Note: I'm sending you a plot bunny via e-mail. I'm sorry, I just couldn't wait *blush*