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for Gettin' Bi Mai

by MizumiBlu

person hitori
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i almost didn't catch this chapter, heh...i didn't see it:P hehe jou ans seto ARE gonna meet next chapter...right? i hope so!

i never really liked mai in the first place...every single time i see her i feel the urge to take a 2by4 to the TV...i don't know what it is...i just can't stand the bitch, thats so mean isn't it *nervous laugh*

dude have you heard this new muffin joke? huh? well I'll just tell you! ahem...

there where two muffins in an oven...
one of the muffins says "phew! it sure is hot in here isn't it?"
then the other muffin, turns sharply and says "AHHHH!!! TALKING MUFFIN!!!"

lmao!!! one of my college friends told that to me, and i started laughing sooo hard! it's the most stupidest joke i've EVER heard...but i laughed! i laughed so hard, that all the people in the room stopped what they where doin' and looked at me...and my college buddy, slowly took a couple of steps away from me. lol, anyways thats it for now, i seriously can't wait to see what happens next...so suspenseful(sp?)ttyl!
person Velvetina
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Squee!!! Cool, cool, cool. Gods I love Otogi he's such a crazy, flirtatious, sexy guy! **Grins** Honda sure has a job keeping him in line.

Dude, the image of Seto in my head looks frickin awesome. I mean seriously sexy...can I borrow him, just for a little while? **Puppy eyes** I'll return him almost exactly as he came...heh. Though on a more serious note I do have to say that the setup is very good, thoug our dear CEO needs to get off the pot! Tut Tut Seto its so bad for you, more so than I think he's realised, but maybe he'll figure it out. I cannot believe he managed to forget what name his friends band was...bwahaha.


Anyway you get better okay honey? **Hugs** Being sick is sucky! I'll bake you cakes and make you lots of tea/coffee, hee. As much as I love reading your stuff I don't want you pushing it. xx
person LadyVirgo91656
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry you're sick. Get well soon. You really don't have Seto on drugs do you. I know he was crushed but damn. Get them back together they need each other in more ways than one. Update soon.
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me- lol baka seto
seto- mn, laced brownies
me- oh god
jou- stop with dat crap, i can be ya drug
seto- YAY
me- YAY! update lurv you Blu!
person paranoidcharlotte
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh GET BETTER SOON!...... so you can update *devilish laugh* I love a Seto with long hair but very few fics acually have it :( I can so totally see him smoking and doing drugs but again very few fics do that as well. I can't wait for the next chapter when Jou and Seto meet *squeals* update soon!

On something totally unrelated I just got 3 angelfish for my tank! Their so cute! I can only hope that my eel doesn't eat them when I put it in with them. (I don't know why I had the urge to tell you that I'm just excited about it)
person Neptune
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im liking this already! And you need to update Hells Cradle...AFTER you get better! *hands you flowers* Get well soon!!
person Drachenaugen
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww Mizu! Get well soon, do it for your fans! No really, keep you mind on getting better, readers can wait for updaes, your health is more important *hugs and give get well chocolate*
Ok, so Kaiba changed a LOT O_o And now he has a sexy tan (though I seriously dislike him smoking pot, normal cigarettes is one thing but pot, nuh uh). Otogi and Honda knew of his crush? And he still can't get over it *hugs Seto* Poor thing, what a cruel twist of fate T_T So a friend from the orphanage huh? I have an idea where this is going *snickers* (I just might get my oh so wanted jealousy act from Jou *evil smirk*) Yet I'm worried that whatever plan Jou has on the next chapter may hurt Seto (if he's being used that is). I'm worried and exited at chap 3 now :p Anyhow, great job, keep the good stuff coming (when your better) please!
person jess
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love dis story. i have never, ever read a story where seto was high but i think its great. update soon
person Samantha Kaiba
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait for more...update soon as its a good story
person girlo
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, i can see whre this is going! unless I'm very very wrong.... But it'd be enjoyable anyways