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for Gettin' Bi Mai

by MizumiBlu

person catti-dono
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOO....love it when Satou is the uke....hes soooo cute when he is the uke....grrrr.....catti
person clumsykitty
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!!!!!!!!

n_n

Why in the name if God Satoru kissed my Seto? -because he's mine- I want more of Katsu and Seto together like lovers, yes, but don't make suffer my little blue eyes, he's soooo inocent!

please

*watery huge kitty eyes*

At least Mai leave for a while, but knowing you, she'll back soon with a plan.

You know how much you make shine and smile, because you write in a single beautiful way

n_n
person clumsykitty
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!!!!!!!!

n_n

Why in the name if God Satoru kissed my Seto? -because he's mine- I want more of Katsu and Seto together like lovers, yes, but don't make suffer my little blue eyes, he's soooo inocent!

please

*watery huge kitty eyes*

At least Mai leave for a while, but knowing you, she'll back soon with a plan.

You know how much you make shine and smile, because you write in a single beautiful way

n_n
person SilverYaoiHellion
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First he's almost molested by Joey, then Joey succeeds in making Mai think he's together with him. I know that Mai isn't done in this story, I just have a feeling about it; so please hurry so I can see everything else!
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me- YAY justice!
seto- yeah, you could have just told mai to **** off
jou- eh, she's hard ta get rid of
me- ...sorry mizumi, no plot bunnies *brain on empty*
seto- your brain is always on empty
me- shut up! *mumbles bad things*
seto- uh huh, shut up!
me- *sniffles* you're so mean
jou- ANYWAY er, welcome to da band
seto- yup! I get my puppy!
jou- i'm de seme here
seto- *pouts* T-T sooo
me- you make a kawaii uke! *graps uke and seme paddle from Expo*
seto- ...XB
me- ah, anyway, love it! hope to read more of your work! teehee what did you think of the fics for you? you're so popular!
person Velvetina
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**Squee** Awsome as ever. I adored Jou's reaction...heck and Seto's. This is just a perfect setup to be honest and I am so looking foward to seeing what you are going to do next!

Ergh, I'm feeling pretty bad today so I'm gonna cut this review short **Hug** Sorry honey, longer one next time I promise. xx
person SilverYaoiHellion
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha!!! Joey just gets into more and more trouble, and he'll continue to get into more trouble, won't he? I like the villian version of Mai, it almost fits her perfectly within this story. Plus, I just hated yet loved the way she handled Joey's almost breakoff; he deserved it, yet I felt so sorry for him. I'm starting to like this story more than your other oh so exciting story; but I'm hoping that you update them both quickly. Till then, bye!!!
person hitori
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
first of all, Satoru fucking rocks!!! i love him! *glomps homemade Satoru plushie" =P heh, and its soooooo ironic that its Seto that Jou does that with! anywayz, i've got chemistry work, which is totally eating my ass right now, ttyl!

p.s sorry so short -.-;;
person Drachenaugen
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! XD This chapter gets 2 thumbs up! So great! Ok, where do I start? Well, I didn’t mind Mai in the previous chapters, I even went as far as thinking “poor gal, she’s going to get kicked to the curb and she didn’t do anything”. NOW I’m thinking “bitch, not only should you get kicked to the curb, you should bounce off and get hit by a truck”. Gah! How can she control Jou like that?! I already hate her. Now, I’m wondering if this some type of reaction is going to happen with Satoru, cause right now I’m thinking he’s a cute boy next door with some spice in him (yeah baby, you put that bitch in her place *smirks*). I wonder if as this fic developes I’m going to hate him too or fell sorry for him? *looks at Satoru uncertainly*. Kuroki is so cool, real laid back and just plain chillin’, I like him too.
The sweet irony of fanfiction characters reading fanfiction was just hilarious. And the whole “I’m no bottom bitch” related to those fics just made my day.
The Seto - Jou interaction was to DIE for! I loooved the “you got my song? Why so shy?” part, it almost killed me. Now I can’t believe Jou didn’t recognize our CEO! Apparently Seto changed far more than just a lot like I initially though O.o And long hair in a ponytail just ‘clicks’ for Kaiba. Can he get any cooler?
Man, I’m going to stop my review here because if I continue enumerating ever single thing I adored about this chapter, the review will be as long as a novel itself. Just keep giving me chapters like this and I’ll be one happy girl. So keep the great stuff coming please!
person Samantha Kaiba
schedule September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon....you cant leave it like that... must read more, keep them coming!