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for Gettin' Bi Mai

by MizumiBlu

person anessa
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*breathing REALLY DEEPLY* WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU? OH MY GOD, I CANT BELIVE YOU ACTUALLY ENDED IT HERE, GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OH MY GOD WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!? I CANT FUCKING BELIVE YOU ENDED IT HERE! *stopped her ranting and takes deep breath* oh my god it was hilarious I didn't even know you started another project, sorries I love this one I have no idea which one is better, it's probably better not to choose. nyways what happens next?....[anessavanella@aim.com]
person paranoidcharlotte
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm hurt you didn't answer my review :( But anyway why did it take you so long to update? I think you were just being cruel! Hehe Satoru does have a crush on our little Seto! For the tour you have to have them come to Western Australia! Why? Because that's where I live! Go Australia! Um what does it mean with Seto being part of the band now? I can picture Seto playing instraments (and being pretty good) but not being in a band. Maybe he could be a songwriter. Or a backup dancer hehehe! Or just stand there a look pretty I think that one would suit him best! Cause he'd get to look pretty!
person Neptune
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I laughed the whole time they were putting Mai in her place xD
This is turning out great!!
And no I'm not a active fan fiction writer. I'm much to busy writing the script for my graphic novels.
But when I get the script for volume one done, do you wanna read it? You should email me, you know!
NeptuneIceKat@aol.com
Or IM me. Thats also my MSN and my aim is NeptuneIceKat (Im so original!)
person ChibiRinni
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ HI! So glad the next chapter is up! It was soooo good!! XD Seto has got his hands (or was that his lips?) full! **jumps up n down n excitement n Aniras takes over again** YO! Anotha kick ass chappy. We can't wait fer da next one! XD Glad ya like us. We maebay twins, but we aint alike at all!.... sept wit our Yaoi obsessions XD Namely Jou n Kaiba! This story sounds great so far n we're all ready fer da next one! **watches ChibiRinni bounce in excitement as she imagines wat will happen next** O.o yeah, she's n her own world again... CONTINUE! XDDDD OUT!

~ChibiRinni ^.~ and Aniras >]
person LadyVirgo91656
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know Mai's not out of the picture yet, but I think in all truth is a closet gay. He does have feelings for Kaiba and to throw them together like this is going to be interesting. As for Mai she is a BITCH! I think if I read your other chapters right he has tried to break up with her but Mai just can't take a hint. As for Jou If he doesn't get his act together someone is going to get hurt bad. Oh thank-you for the review everyone loves the story.I'm thinking about posting it to the list. Let me know if that is okay. Update soon.
person jess
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay 4 another update. and thank ra that the test wasn't used cause that would be soooo nasty. update soon.
person Drachenaugen
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God, all the screaming was hilarious! And I also loved the bit of "I resent this or that" AND I also love the purring and running a hand through that lovely hair (having someone do that is soooo nice, I adore it). And Jou is already becoming jealous! And letting his hands wonder as well *snickers*. I hope Seto doesn't get hurt though, and even if I'm a J/S fan at heart, I wouldn't mind seeing some 'interaction' between the brunette and Satoru, if you catch my drift *wink* Jou does deserve a little punishment for his actions. Mai got her go and dignity kick so bad, I’m so glad! Though I doubt this will be the and of the groups ‘bitch problems’

So you're planning on doing a web page on J/S? You just let me know if you come around to building it. I myself love to draw and would love to contribute, as long as you're interested in contribution (hell, I might even try a long haired Seto myself if you don't mind). I've done one fanart that involves Seto and Jou, though, since it's based on a plot bunny, it's got Seto not looking human. Yeah, yeah, you must be thinking WTF, but check it out if you have some time (http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/39005175/). Hove you got a webpage where you post your art? I’d love to see it.

Anyhow, I'm getting off topic. Great job dear, can't wait to see what happens when the start the tour. Keep the good stuff coming!
person girlo
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahahaahaha, Jou's jealous! Mai's horrible, Seto has long hair, it's all so wonderful! I can't wait for the start of the tour! Also, after thinking long and hard about it I decided those lighters sound really cool and i want one! Of course I'll keep reading!
person ZeldaFitz
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really getting good. I'm glad Jou finally stood up to that shrieking harpy. Now on to Jou and Seto...
person Zoe
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME! This chappie was just completly FUNNY. I couldn't stop laughing! Mai bashing is just so... FUN! And yes, drawing is awsome as well! "bigger things" teehee. I think the drumer knows just whats gonna happen on the tour. Lol. Oh! I just can't wait! All these sinarinos! >___< oooh!! Please update soon! I'll be waiting!! And keep up the great work! Loves ya! -cheers for MizumiBlu-