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me- *bubbling with love from mizumiblu*
seto- =_= i don't feel good
jou- oh MY GAWD I KNOCKED UP MY FRICKEN BOY FRIEND
me- DUR! I could have told you that! and MARIK! BAD DOG SIT!
jou- *sits*
seto/me- >.> baka inu
mokuba- XD MY Nii-sama's going to have a BABY!
me- or a tribe, you KNOW secretly that Otogi and Honda have a little tribe of their own and didn't mention anything about it. *snickering*
honda- oh god
otogi- why did you tell her?
honda- >> we don't have one
me- sure....anyway...
seto- *passed out at docs*
jou- O.O >-< I shoulda gone wit 'im!
marik- *takes seto while jou's not looking* *a quiet* BAAHAHAHAHAHa...ha. ha.......ha
me- jou, seto's acting girly......again. Lamo
jou- shut up!
me- ....udate, so they don't kill me. :)

Yay their gonna find out in the next chapter *claps* I've said it before and I'll say it again I LOVE A HORMONAL SETO HE'S SO CUTE WHEN HE'S BITCHY! Hehe I thought that was cute how Mokuba decided to touch Seto stomach and Seto was like WTF!?!? Hehe Jou thought he had another man in the car hehe! Oh in my review for Getting bi mai I forgot to mention that I thought that song you wrote was good it seemed to me like it could have been a real song (mind you if it was a real song I possibly wouldn't like it because I'm into the roaring like you're contispated, screaming, I'm so bloody depressed heavy metal kind of stuff... like slipknot WHOOT) anyway update real soon PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEE I've just finished year 12 (WHOOT!) so I have a lot more time to read fanfiction! ... oh my angelfish died..... the eel killed them... but I love my eel more so it's all good *runs of to play broken sword 4 and resident evil nemesis*

@_@ You had me on the freaking edge of my chair waiting on this ; ;
Its really good though. Poor Set-chan *huggles him*

ewwwww!!!!!!! i can't believe seto touched a used preg. tester thingy. that's just nasty. and he collpased too....poor seto. pregnancy is snot his thing. but that's ok cause i love ur story so update really soon.

OH NO! Collapsed! And sinister Marik, always up to no good. i guess... I don't really read stories with him in them that much, but from what I gather, he's not the nicest guy. Anyway, I can't wait for more!

Good as always, please continue ^^. I'm so intrigued :P.

Bye!

:D YAY w00t! ^_^ you UPDATED! *Does a dance* This story ROCKS! Seto is so funny :P! o.o' did you think i was mad? Sorreh T-T im not mad i was just wonderin! ok *Begin Rant* SO MARIK IS THE DIRTY BASTARD.... OMG IF HE TRIES ANYTHING ILL SHOVE HIS STUPID ROD UP HIS ASS ........ EYE PART FIRST!.....*end rant* Woo can't wait for the next update! Poor seto...

You have to update soon....I have to find out what Seto is going to be like when he wakes up and when Joey gets to him....just please update soon

SO I’m now Drachen a.k.a. ?The cute reviewer' huh? LOL I really haven’t been called cute by any other person but you, so it really tickled my funny bone when I read that. Thanks!

Ok, the first paragraph of this chapter is worth gold :) It’s written in a way that makes you think the poor soul has last everything including his family, job and even the house pet LOL Sorry Seto, but it’s time to let that peanut butter go after all.

Also, Mokuba is so well characterized in this chapter *pats Mizu for a job well done* First of all, he really shows his ‘Kaiba’ side, researching all the info about he pregnancy, having to know every little thing there is to know about the whole matter to handle it better. And then he acts ‘exactly’ like the curious child he should be at his age and does the whole tummy feeling thing (which btw, was one of the cutest things I have ever seen! *glomps Mokie*). Btw, I am SO proud of the "that is wrong on so many levels" bit because I'm really bothered by incest. To mistake the difference between brotherly love and sexual interest is just unforgiveable in my eyes *claps furiously for Mizumi*

Poor Jou didn’t have any luck with his 'methods of conviction' LOL This also adds a bit of reality to the fic, poor Seto isn’t always going to want sex (though I hope he does, cause then I get good smut *lewd thoughts*). Can’t wait for next chapter and all the different reactions there will be, and I’m sure the baby will be accepted sooner or latter by both parents (the uncle is already happy with the idea as we all saw).

And now the bit shocker of the fic, Marik! Now I must say you really managed to fool me there 'cause at first I though Egypt + battle city + purple eyes = Marik. But then he refered to Seto as High Priest and mentioned not dying and though (like I mentioned in my e-mail) "maybe this guy is from ancient Egypt" and thus ruled Marik out. Now the whole idea I had in my head changes drastically but now unpleasantly. I have always loooved Yami Marik (it is the yami right?) because he has such a cool character design! Really, the author did the *best* color choice with this villain. Plus I remember I used to giggle madly when whatching the show and looking at all those crazy expressions he always made, as well as weird things like licking his lips and all that, he's wonderfully insane :D So yeah, I can’t say I’m bothered by this change of perspective for the fic at all. Now what I’m truly curious to know is not why Marik wants Seto (I mean hell, it obvious, he’s THE sexy Seto Kaiba) but why does he want to have children with him? O.o I hope that gets a explanation at some point (even if that point is very far away just yet) because I really need to know why. Sure, the idea of a litter of evil chibi Marik’s running around causing mayhem is as cute as hell (in a real evil sort of way), but it does bring up some questions.

Well Mizu, as always, great job and keep the good stuff coming!!!

Note: It appears that my reviews keep getting longer even if it isn’t intentional ó_O

GAh ! OMGAWSH o.o' Update I BEG OF THE!!!! I cant review if you dont update mon ami!