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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all, sorry for the delay in the review dear. I’ve been very busy with a deadline, and after that I was left exhausted (there wasn’t much difference between me and a vegetable yesterday) so even if I did read the chapter before, if I had posted a review then, it would have been rushed and sucked big time, and that wouldn’t be fair to you after all the effort you put in you’re updates.
Ok, now on to the review. I must say Mizu, you really outdid yourself with this one. Seto’s reaction was SO believable! Sure, first he was ‘am I being punked?’ and all that (which truly was hilarious, paying the producer to not bother him is soooo Kaiba, money makes the world go around), but then he got the sad and shocked, ‘oh noes! I’m going to be a freak’ *hugs Seto* It’s just the perfect change of reactions Mizu. And I’m sure that, sooner or later, someone (either Moki, Jou or mother Miki (I haven’t forgotten about her, lol)) will make Seto realize the good part of being pregnant (even if he is a guy :P) if he doesn’t realize it on his own. Now I can’t wait to see how the ‘daddy’ will react, I’m sure he won’t start crying like ‘mom’ :) I also wonder how the gang will react when the find out, cause sooner or later they’ll find out no matter what.
I liked Haruko-sensei more than a bit. She’s pretty cool. Mura-sensei is also good, but the lady has something that just clicks.
Also, don’t worry about little time for feedbacks, you took the time to update and that’s more than enough. Though I would like at least a hint about my Yami Marik and children question at some point, that is, if it’s not to much trouble *puppy eyes* (something like ‘yeah, you’ll find out, don’t get your panties in a knot’ or ‘it’ll be a cold say in hell before I tell you anything’). Also, it is the Yami right?
Anyway, got to go continue with my thesis. Great job and keep the good stuff coming please!
Ok, now on to the review. I must say Mizu, you really outdid yourself with this one. Seto’s reaction was SO believable! Sure, first he was ‘am I being punked?’ and all that (which truly was hilarious, paying the producer to not bother him is soooo Kaiba, money makes the world go around), but then he got the sad and shocked, ‘oh noes! I’m going to be a freak’ *hugs Seto* It’s just the perfect change of reactions Mizu. And I’m sure that, sooner or later, someone (either Moki, Jou or mother Miki (I haven’t forgotten about her, lol)) will make Seto realize the good part of being pregnant (even if he is a guy :P) if he doesn’t realize it on his own. Now I can’t wait to see how the ‘daddy’ will react, I’m sure he won’t start crying like ‘mom’ :) I also wonder how the gang will react when the find out, cause sooner or later they’ll find out no matter what.
I liked Haruko-sensei more than a bit. She’s pretty cool. Mura-sensei is also good, but the lady has something that just clicks.
Also, don’t worry about little time for feedbacks, you took the time to update and that’s more than enough. Though I would like at least a hint about my Yami Marik and children question at some point, that is, if it’s not to much trouble *puppy eyes* (something like ‘yeah, you’ll find out, don’t get your panties in a knot’ or ‘it’ll be a cold say in hell before I tell you anything’). Also, it is the Yami right?
Anyway, got to go continue with my thesis. Great job and keep the good stuff coming please!
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe I loved his reaction BRAVO *claps* I love it the way he was like "ASHTON FUCKING KUTCHER!" I also love the idea of him paying Ashton off hehe! AAWWW don't be sad little Seto (little Seto curled up in a ball so cute!) I want to know how Jou's going to react DAMNIT!
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hello anessa here. the punk'd part was just hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I was if I was white, I bet my face would be red all over! nyways, yeah...it's great but I like seto's reaction VERY well, it's not sappy at all. just really surprised and it seems like he really doesn't want the child. I hope u update sooner than later!
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto, he will be a freak, and people will point and laugh and that crazy egyptian is still after him and all sorts of bad stuff can happen, and....and.... I can't wait to read more!
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think the doctors should have realized that if Seto was pregnant who the father was and let him stay. They did more harm than good. When it was finally verified Jou could have been there as support for Seto and not ending up trying to pick up the pieces. Now as it is Seto is going to have to tell and convince Jou by himself without proof that he is pregnant and too top this off too mant people know and the media when it gets out will have a field day. Not all medical personel will keep this private. Money can make people do some unethical things no matter how much it will end up hurting people. I just hope Jou and Seto can weather the storm that is coming their way. Sure Seto's in shock. He just found out he's pregnant and Jou should have been there as well. Some doctors just don't care. I just hope they don't try an use Seto as some sort of lab rat. Update Soon.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay for preggy seto! still love dis story so update soon.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo that was a good chapter updated soon
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*LMFAO at the "Punked" part* xD; Yes! Die Ashton Kutcher! Wait does that mean that Seto was "Punked" before? THAT might be an interesting story!! Ha hah!!
Aweee poor Seto! ::huggles him and glares at Jou::
Aweee poor Seto! ::huggles him and glares at Jou::
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAWWWWW!!! BABY! BABY! BABY! BABY! ^-^ ah-hahahahahaha!
anywayz, THIS ONE WAS EVEN FUNNIER!! LMAO! dude, the punk'd joke was hilarious!! it was all quiet in my house, and, mom was watching Opera and then she heard a miniacle laughing coming from my room...she said that she thought i was dieing at first...but i was..crying and laughing at the same time, and it felt damn good!
man, i'm a little upset that my review was cut off, oh well...i was just rambling anyway, if you ask me...it was a REALLY REALLY REALLY long review...i don't even know what i was thinking.
anywayz! i don't have any short stories to tell you..life is kinda a drag right now, but until next time! ^_~
anywayz, THIS ONE WAS EVEN FUNNIER!! LMAO! dude, the punk'd joke was hilarious!! it was all quiet in my house, and, mom was watching Opera and then she heard a miniacle laughing coming from my room...she said that she thought i was dieing at first...but i was..crying and laughing at the same time, and it felt damn good!
man, i'm a little upset that my review was cut off, oh well...i was just rambling anyway, if you ask me...it was a REALLY REALLY REALLY long review...i don't even know what i was thinking.
anywayz! i don't have any short stories to tell you..life is kinda a drag right now, but until next time! ^_~
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is horrible!!! What's Jou going to say!?!?!? Please Update this fine piece of work, this is one of the most interesting stories I've read.
~Usagi-chan
~Usagi-chan