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for Hell's Cradle - The First Trimester

by MizumiBlu

person Super Uke Seto
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Keep it up. Please update soon.
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Jou is so wicked both him and Mokuba. Seto had better think of something fast. Jou isn't going to let him out of his sight. Call in the calvary.
person LadyVirgo1956
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How can I put this awesome chapter. I feel kinda sorry for Seto at this point and that doctor is and ass Mokuba and Jou had a right to know about the baby after all they are family. Rings from a bubble gum machine got to love Jou and his inventiness. Jous right on one point though Seto does need help and support through this. Love it cant wait to see what happens next.
person Terrie1958
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
We have waited WAY too long for these updates xD But I love the plot twists that you're laying down! I'll talk to you on AIM as usual.

Yes, LittleKuriboh IS the best. xD

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person paranoidcharlotte
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT! You updated! :) Hehe I found it really cute that they were wearing rings from a gumball machine. The description of the rings sounds like the ones they wear in Sims 2 for marriage. Hehe I'm so obsessed with this pairing I create Seto and Jounouchi sims.... then I make them get married and use a cheat to get Seto pregnant from Jounouchi :) Poor little Seto, nobodies treating him seriously. I hate it when people treat me like I'm a child and having a tantrum.
person Shadow2007
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seto... wanted... an.. ABORTION! WHAT THE HELL IMMA KILL HIM *Grabs Rusty Spork*.... wait a sec AFTER THE BABY IS BORN YOU DIE SETO! RAWR! >D This story is so FREAKIN AWESOME :D! Hahahahahhaha Joey is like high w/o the drugs:P. Rings out of a vending machine tck! how cheap!
person girlo
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor little Seto. I totally understand where he's coming from, being a pregnant male myself and all... glad to see you're still alive, now sleep or study or whatever and i will paciently wait for the next chapter.
person Mishiko Shinsei
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto! He might have had a chance to deal with things more rationally if not for that BASTARD Gozaboro. Please don't leave us hanging here long. I need to know what happens with Katsu and Seto!
person paranoidcharlotte
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOO that's interesting from the lemon in the first fic I thought Seto was a virgin......... oh I like an abused Seto I guess I just like him in distrss teehee. Oh poor little Seto but it's obvious he's gonna keep it ..... otherwise you wouldn't have promised 3 fics for the trimesters! Wow Jou was really accepting of the fact that he was pregnant I expected him to be a bit like WTF!?!?! You do realize your a man!!! I guess he was ready for it cause of the preg test but still. I can't wait for the others reaction you have to include Jou's dad and mums reactions in it to. Is Jou gonna somehow find out about how Gozaburo abused our poor Seto?
person Super_Uke_Seto
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An abortion how ironic. I'm doing a report on that subject. update soon