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for Hell's Cradle - The First Trimester

by MizumiBlu

person Girlo
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOu're back! I'm so happy! I was worried and then I thought "Maybe she's busy with school" So I got less worried. But now you're back, so it's all OK! YAY! Also, Jou's a bit of a moron. But it's good that Kaiba seems to be lightening up (if only a tiny bit) on the idea of having a kid.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Update! God, I was very anxious to read this, but at the same time I feel a bit bad about it now: just look how much Seto is suffering *hugs CEO* Poor guy, it's like all the shit is coming his way. Please make it better for him son Jou!

But, even if I feel a bit guilty about saying this, it was still funny as hell to see Seto desperately fighting for his possessions *lol* Again, poor dear. And also Jou's rediculous ideas of wind hurting Seto and the baby and the whole car discussion *lmao* God, men can be so stupid at times *shakes head*

I am very curious to see how the living arrangements of this trio will be from now on (yeah, father in law included *lol*). And if our horny blond will get some loving *lmao* He's got the odds against him, but he is the lucky one, we'll see.

Dear as always, great job! Keep the good stuff coming please!

[DRACHENAUGEN]
person sindad-kri
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
person Annya
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!^_^
Please continue, this so good!!!
Angsty and hormonal CEO, WOW!Daddy Jou and oncle Mokuba for take care of them, more wow!! I love this series is so fresh and original plot.
Thanks you!
I'll keep waiting the next up date.
Bye and good look in your studies.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seto- you idiot! T-T
jou- eh? xD
me- oo kami
jou- eh?
me- only idiots say what?
jou- what?
seto- xD
me- >w< bwahahaha ooo and what of marik's evil plot? maliks still phyco *huggles mal plushie*
seto- you don't have a malik plushie you have an al and fluffy plushie
me- phsh, phsh, you have a blue eyes one AND a red eyes
seto- O_O T-T you said you wouldn't tell
me- o.O ah.....anyways, update's yes updates for us, hobbitses we shall kills yes yes. ^^;
person Samantha Kaiba
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Those chapters were great and I love how Jou just seems to be acting as if nothing is wrong and Kaiba is wishing that none of it was happening I love how you have everything worked out. You have to update soon...:-)
person clumsykitty
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!

*_*

what a beautiful pair of chapters I read!!

You're amazing, as I always said, plis write more!!!

I can't wait to see Jounuchi Jr. *gigles*
person Drachenaugen
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO! Mom’s been taken hostage! Jounouchi Seto, I love how that sounds. As opposed to Kaiba Seto, which is more, stern and business like, Jounouchi Seto sounds a lot more mellow, more friendly even, very appropriate for the CEO new role as a mommy ^_^ Living together under the same roof as Jou’s dad though, that’s going to be complicated. Not because I think the man is evil, but he sure as hell isn’t the sweet type that’s just accept it easily *prays for Seto*. Hope Jou isn't dumb enough to go telling his old man that Seto is pregnant *crosses fingers*

The rings gave me cuteness overload again! And trust Jou to be lucky enough to get two rings, one after the other lol. And him treating Seto like a small boy, pampering, cooing, and nuzzling him…KYAAAA! TOO CUTE!!

Puaj, just the idea of someone eating placenta is …blejjj! But they did deserve being made fun at like that, silly boys.

Can’t wait for more Mizu, you did a great job. Keep the good stuff coming please!
person Velvetina
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**Heaps on the love** Adore it, and was happy to see this up. How have ya been girl? You vanished for like and age and I wuz worried. **Hugs**

Anyway, this was such a good read but poor poor Seto! He's all confused and hormonal... welcome to a girls world my friend **Laugh** Oh well Jou will be a good seme and handle it... even if he has to bribe Seto with his lil bro! I love Mokuba... and Otogi + Honda together... and of course Yugi and even poor Ryou who is sick. Hee I guess I just love them all.

Anyway as ever I hope to see more soon!

Velvetina xx
person anessa
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome! update soon Im too lazy to type out any emotional shit.