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for Hell's Cradle - The First Trimester

by MizumiBlu

person KrystalChronicals
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon ^^
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me- just a bit but it's alright ^_^ *glomps back* YAY you're back!
seto- ..house wife?
jou- >:} *drags seto into his room*
seto- >w<
tat- =_=
me- i know T__T i'm missing out on the fun
person kisa
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now that's my girl...i'm so desprate you know(sorry I called you that).but I love you i can't help that!!! it's gettin hard to predict where this fic is gettin every time I guss something diffrent happens but youre seto in this fiction is so adorable for once I can call him human and it's nice!!!update soon baby and don't make me feel loenlier in my shitty lif.love kisa
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The best thing about this chapter has to be, without a doubt, Jounouchi Sr. My God, I love him! He’s so forward, brutish and rude but with no bad intentions behind his actions. I adore him. And he’s actually ‘cool’ for once, I’m tired of seeing him being an ass to Jou in fics, raping him and things like that. Here he’s a reckless father who likes the bottle more than he should at times but nothing more. Adore him, yes I do *claps*
It is official; the Jounouchi’s are quickly winning me over. First mother Miki and now her son too (not to mention Katsuya of course).

Yay for sexually deprived Jou! LMAO So much fun! Well, he had to have some retribution for being such a pain to Seto in some aspects (even if he means well). I don’t think lack of sex will be his only problem after those comments on Jou’s dad’s part. My evil side is loving every minute of this, very much so.

And crazy Egyptians rapists are running amuck! OoO Poor cable man and any future workers that go to there :S But I like to see our evil stalker on the loose again. Wonder what they have in mind now. Will have to wait and see.

Loved this, Mizu (as always LOL). Please keep the good stuff coming!

[DRACHENAUGEN]
person girlo
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh families. talk about taking one step forward and two steps back for Seto and Jou. This is why you never bring your pregnant boyfriend home to mom and dad! ... wait a second.... I don't live in a fanfic... Nevermind. I'm very nervous about what Marlik (I combined them) will do to the little happy family. I'll keep reading if you keep writing. Even if I do have to take a break to study for exams, eventually, i will read them.
person Super_Uke_Seto
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH my Freakin God! I'd shot Jou's dad if I was in Seto position. UI'm a chick and I don't even do my own washing. Marik and them are crazy.
person kisa
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You big fat lier....you said you update fast You said it.I peomised I won't review for you any more and never to read youre stuff buit god you are really have no considiration toward other people.........this time I bet you don't have an excuse do you?,,,,,,,,god I didn't want to read this...oh well......you really donb't deserve to be this talented cause you have one hell of a bad attitude....you update this fic and gettin bi mai both tommorrow......god is not fair ...oh well i guss no matter angry I am I really can't hate you it's almost a month you moran....a whole fuckin month!!!.........well.since youre back i don wanna scare you away...new chapter was great i loved it!(i hate the fact that I loved it!!!) but if you walk out one more time I you lose one of youre fans forever...now keep this up
person kisa
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you...you.........god where the hell where you? how could you not update for a whole month? youre one fAT BIG LAIER(you promised you finish gettin bi mai soon)!!! i waited and waited and waited and I promised myself I wont review for that moran...she jus don deserve to be this talented..and here I am breakin my own promise.well now we're even,,,,,,,,,but if you won't update both this fic and gettin bi mai soon....you lose one of youre best fans cause I won't read one more of youre stories....you got it?...,.(nice chapter by the way I love it)....Update soon baad girl you really haqve a hell to pay
person Anon
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O___O what a chapter

seto- *sobs* my things......><
jou- =-= what a problem dis is
seto- >< stupid puppy
me- o.o
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great chapter. I couldn't believe Joey's dad was selling his stuff. GOD! I hate him!