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for Hell's Cradle - The First Trimester

by MizumiBlu

person YamiSphinx
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Joey! I just hope Seto warms up to the idea of a little pup runnin around the house. For doing such good job you get..........a...........COOKIE!!!! *Holds up plate* CONGRATULATIONS! Keep up the good writing! ^__^
person Anon
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay ur back!
person clumsykitty
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!!!!

n_n

I knew it!! This is not going to be so easy... agh... but I love it!!! I only hope that Seto understand when the doctor said to him about the news... and Joey... oh, my...!!!

You know you're right!!!
person Velvetina
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes I did miss you! You were gone far too long for my liking **Hugs** I don't know what you've managed to get yourself into but dang right you're gonna have to give us timely updates of both **cackles**...unless of course there are good reasons.

Well don't worry about this fic, so far it gets a great bit thumbs up...but more on that in a moment.

I ended up making my own cheesecake in the end...I lurve cheesecake. Not as much as Seto Kaiba, or Jou, or Tsuzuki, or Watari...or various other bishies that I'm fond of **Laugh** But cheesecake is high on the list...eh moving on!

Awww thank you, you're popular with me too!

Now onto the actual review, tis very good. Though poor Seto must be feeling really crappy, and some of his food choices scare me O.o, really dude that will NOT be helping the situation. **Grins**

Also I'm now wracking my brain to try to figure out who the baddie is. Battle city? Is it one of the main contenders that we saw or was it just some 'nobody' that Kaiba happened to beat on his way to the top? I odn't know! **Whine** I wanna know! Lol

Update soon...PLEASE! Hee
xx
person paranoidcharlotte
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait till Jou and Seto find out Setos pregnant HURRY UP AND UPDATE ooooohhhhh please?? Ohno Mariks back (well I assume it's Marik!) Or maybe it's Malik cause some people call YamiM Malik and some people call him Marik personally I call him Marik and the hikari Malik but enough about me just UPDATE!
person Hitori
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOTZ! *glomp* sorry, i had to do that. Its a great start and i'm so stoked about reading the rest!

I really don't know why i named myself O.O heh i guess it was because my very first review, on the last story...*strikes a thinking pose*hmmm..oh well

lol the most funniest thing happened the other day! and i just have to tell you! ok. i was at a high school football game, i was watching my cousin(he's a senior), with my life long friend judith(i call her juju). the game was goin great, we were cheering and my cuz was kicking ass! then juju wanted somthing to eat and so we walked towards the consestion(sp?) stand. but on our was over there we caught sight of the most hideous thing we've EVER seen.....it was a anorexic/bulimic girl, whos hip bones popped out of her body...its was GROSS! I'm sure juju thought the same thing...but i never thought she would say anything about it!

so, she sharply took a detour and headed her direction...and i followed behind her, just to be nosey. Juju stopped right in front of her, and looked at the hotdog in her hand and said "you know thats goin' straight to your ass" AND WALKED OFF!!! i had to bite my hand to avoid laughing! IT WAS SOOOO FUNNY!!! but you wanna know whats funnier? The girl threw the hotdog away!! i couln't take it anymore and busted out laughing! The only thing juju did was smirk and continued walking...she's so awsome!

well i'm gonna read your other story! you'll hear from me there! til' next time! ^-^
person girlo
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you know, sometimes i just wanna smack some sense into that boy, Kaiba being that boy. Anyways, glad to see you're back
person Drachenaugen
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I still love you! *hugs back* I read both your e-mails (found the one I had erased by mistake which still wasn't completely lost) and answered with one of my own. Don't feel bad, no harm done 'we're still cool' X3 *hugs again*
person SilverYaoiHellion
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! The sequel's finally up! I was thinking that you have forgotten about your wonderful story and ditched us; but with the new story plot, well, that makes up for it, for now anyway. I'm so happy you started the new story, I hope you continue it soon, very soon!
person Drachenaugen
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great! The 3rd episode of this J/K saga is up and running, I'm happy about that :) I must say I loooooved the first bit/prologue. Crazy stalker talk and plotting makes Drachen a happy reader, can't wait to see more of that. Poor Seto feeling like shit and not able to contain his gag reflex is bad though (yet, as icky as that might have been, it sure as hell was funny) but the title "mother to be" was so perfect on him. Keep the good stuff coming please.
Now, one thing I must confess is that I feel a bit hurt. I was the only one that didn't get any feedback from you T_T Did I offend you with something I said? I reread my last review for 'To keep a Katsu' and couldn't find anything hurtful in it. Although if there was something that bothered you I'm sorry, I didn't mean anything bad by it. This is so sad, I feel rejected by one of my favorite authors *snif, snif* Don't you love your loyal fan anymore? T_T