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Hey I was wondering if you could write this as a story because I really want this to continue! Its good!

More please!!!

I love your story can it be more than a one shot?

I would enjoy another chapter or two maybey even turn it into a developing story of yugi learning to serve a good mistress. I...i dont know how to explian it but when you come out of an abusive relationship like that. And then you come to one where there isnt any fear it's so different. I was with a man who treated me terribly... He didnt deserve the title "master" that he insisted i called him. At one point i dissaponted him to the point that i ended up in the hospital. My family at this point had dismissed me because of my choice of lifestyle so i never had any visiters. exept for him... Whenever he was about i prtended to sleep until he left. i was in the hospital for a good two months. He found out my game and slapped me awake. While in the hospital a male nurse i made friends with heard our comotion and kicked him out the hospital. i never saw "master" again. Oh my i didnt mean to write this much! ^^ Well thee long story short is that that male nurse took me out to dinner after i was released. that was a year ago...And lets just say i am happy to curl up at his feet every day :)

Cool story!I hope you decide to make it a full story and not a one-shot, please continue! this is sweet!