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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dude i loved it it was soooooooo hot asomness job and i could so see dat with jou and seto 2 oh ur asomeness at describing and u should really think about a secend one well i loved it thanks 4 the asome read^__________^
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i do not care if the character goes out of character if the story is well written and yours is. is sploosh the real name of the food kink, if so cool.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is awesome! Definately an intresting kink. Hope to read more of your fics soon!
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September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Turns chibi*
YAY!
*clings*
That was interesting to say the least and I cant wait for a sequal
I'm curious about the outcome
YAY!
*clings*
That was interesting to say the least and I cant wait for a sequal
I'm curious about the outcome
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK! I admit, this story was a little weird for me. THIS IS NOT A FLAME! ^.^;;
In the beginning, with Jou n the bathroom, I was hugly debating whether or not I liked this story. I'm one of thoes types of ppl who like the characters to b, at least, a little realistic to how they r on the series, UNLESS there is good reason. I made myself continue to read, even though I was still debating if it would end up better than my innicial thoughts, and ended up really liking this story. When Seto started to explain the 'Sploosh' kink, it suddenly clicked to me. I stopped reading there and started the whole story over again with a new understanding of the Kink. I came to one conclusion: This was very good.
When I stopped and thought about it, Jou DOES seem to like food a lil' more than he should. Though I didn't like the idea in the beggining, it fit at the end and it wasn't so "out of the ordinary" as I first thought. ^.^ It would also make sense for Kaiba to have the same kink since he didn't get to really b much of a kid. I thought u did a really good job on this and just wanted to let u know it! Thanx for the interesting story and I do hope you continue this. I would like to see just how far this "Love of Food" could go. Otherwise, GREAT STORY! BYEE!!
~ChibiRinni ^.^
In the beginning, with Jou n the bathroom, I was hugly debating whether or not I liked this story. I'm one of thoes types of ppl who like the characters to b, at least, a little realistic to how they r on the series, UNLESS there is good reason. I made myself continue to read, even though I was still debating if it would end up better than my innicial thoughts, and ended up really liking this story. When Seto started to explain the 'Sploosh' kink, it suddenly clicked to me. I stopped reading there and started the whole story over again with a new understanding of the Kink. I came to one conclusion: This was very good.
When I stopped and thought about it, Jou DOES seem to like food a lil' more than he should. Though I didn't like the idea in the beggining, it fit at the end and it wasn't so "out of the ordinary" as I first thought. ^.^ It would also make sense for Kaiba to have the same kink since he didn't get to really b much of a kid. I thought u did a really good job on this and just wanted to let u know it! Thanx for the interesting story and I do hope you continue this. I would like to see just how far this "Love of Food" could go. Otherwise, GREAT STORY! BYEE!!
~ChibiRinni ^.^
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL that was funny and sexy. I loved it, made me laugh. Good Job and keep it up!