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schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Who sired who was great. Now where are Ryou and Malik. It also sounds like Yami has a vendetta out for whoever changed him. It would be funny if it was Pegasus. I like that idea Pegasus. It also sounds like the slayers are in for one hell of a fight. You have 3 5000+ year old Vampires who have seen everything there is to see. That makes them strong. Update soon.
person swissnights
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was good and you got to know Yami and the others a little batter.... so in you story does Joey and Seto know Tea and the others??????
please keep the updates comeing
person swissnights
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so when is the next update i hope it's today... i have to know how they get in with the group of Bloodern????
can you e-mail me when you update please
person LadyVirgo91656
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great beginning. Sounds a little like Buffy the Vampire Slayer in the last season. As for the next chapter the history of the vampires would be great. I liked Joey as a glimps into what is to come. Yami being the leader is great. Now to round out the group bring in Seto, Bakura and Ryou, Malik and Marik, and Honda and Otogi, and Yugi. You can make them all Vampires or a combination. I would love to see Seto as a vampire that turned Joey. So update soon.