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by mmm

person smalvina
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i don't want you to stop writing
so plz don't ;)
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!! your story is too great to stop again...i was actually really surprised it was updated...to be quite honest i gave up hope of you ever updating...but this makes me so much happier. As for your problems w/ your little sister, all i have to say is that loser isn't worth your time to kill him. Talk it out w/ your sister and try and get her to understand he's bad news for her and its just better to dump him and let him fend for himself. Well hope i helped at least a little bit. Once again thank you for updating again!!!
person emma
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i luv this story cuz it very refreshing to see a story beining finished
person Nina
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy the story. You're the best:)
person catti
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sometimes us readers have a tendency to be selfish and lap up stories and not review...which is totally mean and cruel of us...I try really hard to at least leave a few meaningful words in a review but do find myself lacking as well...and for this I apologize and will try to do better...as for the worthless piece of shit boyfriend...there is really nothing you can do but be a silent support for your sister when he breaks her heart or she finally realizes what a worthless piece of shit he is and dumps him...she will grow up, eventually...

I do love this story...I can see where Seito has a hard time admitting to his feelings...it seems every writer has a hard time writing a story where Seito truly can admit his feelings freely...unless he is Uke and there are very few of those stories out there...I hope to see an update soon...catti
person Sekre
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the lack of reviews - I still love this story ^^. As for your sister, you just got to stop giving her money. Maybe she'll realize that she can't afford a bum.
person reygurl
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plz update soon i really love your stories!!!
schedule June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Guess it's time t' stop bein' a lurker and review your story then! I'd hate t' see it left unfinished.

Thus far I'm really enjoying the present story as well as the back story from The Stranger. It's refreshing considering I haven't read that one in a while. I really do hope you keep the story going. Tis far to interesting to me for it to just go off into the sunset without an ending. That and I wanna see how Kaiba reacts. *nodnod*
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
goodness kitten...

what in thw world? a car crash!?
drinking and riving is one thing. being high on drugs and driving is another thing. sheesh.
how's you jaw? and you face? hope ya doing ok~ ^_^~~

well nice-o updates!!! quite quick progress eh~ hehehhehee

lookng forward to mroe chapters!!! yay!
person smalvina
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Reviewed
Now update faster! ;)