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ryou noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!! that last scene was really cool but the description of ryou was pretty nasty. don't make him gone for good. have anubis give him life again for sacrificing himself in order to protect everyone else or something. love ur fics so update soon.

Miao. Nice job. I enjoyed your previous fic, although you WERE pretty mean to Ahmose. NE ways, I congradulate you for writing so far a very 'together' sequel. From my experince, it becomes a real 'brain sore' shall we say. Thank you for your hard work and please continue to work hard!

^_^ THIS IZ AWESOME!! I'm really enjoying myself with this story! I only hope Ryou doesn't die again. It killed me to see it happen once, don't do it again!!! ^-^ An I think Ahmose is taking it better than I thought he would.... then again, we didn't see the rape. You had me all sad through this chappy though cuz of Ryou "not loving" Marik! SHAME ON YOU!! (ok, not really XD) Well, hope to see a new chapter soon! Keep up the good work, ok? ^.^ BYEE!!

~ChibiRinni ^.~

YEAH those suggestions i made 4 ahmose didn't fit his style at all. he he. may be grey's anatomy ( McSteamy can get ANYONE addicted to that show) or Law $ Order SVU. any way this chapter made me cry because Ryou, my baby, bakura's baby, marik's baby, everyone's baby... IS DYING!! i was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! i had 2 grab baby wolf cub bakura for comfort and he was so upset that he didn't scratch me when i hugged him half 2 death. but then agian i think he's still tipsy from last tyme after drinking HALF OF THE WINE IN THE WINE CABINET!!! somehow he knows how to get 2 it without me looking. o and when marik got caught... that was like "OoOOooOoOo U GONNA GET YOUR'S FROM YO MAN!! YOU BETTA PACK YO THINGS MAD QUICK!! i swear i heard dave chappelle say in the background " U GOT CAUGHT BITCH!!" it was so grimy 2 ryou. the poor thing. he got served big tyme. is malik ever gonna find out? if he does........ o man ........ all hell will break loose and the gates of heaven will open. when's he coming to the palace of doom anyway ( my new name for seto and pegasus' place). o man ryou's dying... I NEW U WERE GONNA PULL THAT ON HIM U JUST NEVER TORTURE THE BOY ENOUGH AND I KNOW U LAUGHIN. i can see u laughin. lol. u so bad.lol. now i gotta make funeral arrangement's for the boy (depending on whether or not u will have mercy on him 2 live and by some miracle he's saved. will u save him?? will you? please? i luv him. very much. EVEN THOUGH HE'S GETTING ON MY GOD DANM NERVES IN 'SLAVE OF DESTRUCTION') toodles!!** ( eww i never say that... until now of course.)

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN .... who is still recovering from the news about ryou

Dang with the Anubis thing **Sigh** Well it was a nice idea. I throughly enjoyed this chapter. It was highly entertaining. Like Marik and co I had difficulty not laughing at some of the things I just knew I shouldn't laugh at. Mainly Bakura of course...bless him. I also had to laugh at the image of of Ahmose hanging in a tree...though with what happened next I almost wish I hadn't. I know Ahmose is doing this to protect Yami, and I can understand that he loves him dearly but still...when Yami finds out I can't help but wonder what his reaction will be. **Sigh** I guess I'm just going to have to wait.

But at least Bakura managed to take us a step closer to recgonizing Ryou's bottle. Yay for clothes and bottle corrolation, it rules. Though I wonder how many times he's going to get his mouth washed out because he forgets not to curse!

Eh, tell Mikado that I shall happily stay a wombat for his amusement if he can convince that yami of his (Brother in this fic though!) to get rid of my migrane. Its splitting my head in two.

LoL, Peggy IS a few cards short of a deck XD I have to say that this is getting really good! I loled so hard when I imagined Bakura nude that I had to stop reading until I caught my breath! XD Then you had soap flying after him! XD I really can't wait for more now. I'm completely hooked! I hope that Ahmose will be ok, he just sold himself to Seto!! I hope they find a way to free Ryou and themselves though. Really great story! XD Update soon. BYEE!!

~ChibiRinni ^.~

Torturing ahmose? I believe you started it or perhaps Mally-chan with Yami started it...

I dunno I'm just riding along with the joke I always do that. Sometimes too much for my own liking. Ü

really pegasus is kinda nice... eheheh I'm a bit more sadistic than he is in this fic. and seto could pass up as one of my pals, if his attitude never change in this fic (as i think he wouldn't).

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MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN i can't wait 2 c wat happens to seto and pegasus at the end of the story. i swear their getting on my nerves! that scene with bakura being summoned to the castle was just so fuckin rich. i luv the way u incoporate humor into a story even though the situations that the characters are in are very tight and very bad. y did that sound as if i was analyzing a paper? o well. i'm just happy this week is FINALLY OVA. i had so much work 2 do! thankfully wolf cub bakura was there 2 keep me company and 4 me 2 snuggle...although i do have a lot of bite and scratch marks on my arm. the little bastard. i'm gonna miss him. question. is baby lion marik ever gonna show up again? i miss him as much as ryou does. i feel sorry 4 ahmose in this chapter though. the poor thing. he was so humiliated and seto was such a little shit. u know wat ahmose needes? some ice cream. and nachos. bad mix i know but he needs some type of comport food... even though that was a bad mix. maybe a hug can clear that up. And "ring the Alarm" by beyonce. and a new episode of Degrassi. it so goes there. and so does this fic. it goes all the way there i mean it dosen't even stop. i'm starting to sound stupid and random. mayb i should get some sleep. or watch best week ever. or call the psycho ward 2 come take me cuz i'm being dumb now. lemme go find bakura. i'll cuddle him and feel better. *runs off to find bakura messing around in the wine cabinet* o no not again. he's puppy drunk without me.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

Pegasus seems... *quirks his head* a little nice...

Sorry, sadistic thoughts/ideas. Dang, I sometimes have no control over it. Still loved the sexual torture of Ahmose eheheheh even if the bad guys are winning they managed to tease Ahmose. LOLz

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Hola Chica! Como Estas? Buene. thanx 4 letting me keep wolf cub Bakura 4 a week. he's 1 feisty puppy!! he keep's me up howling ALL nite! BUT HE'S SOOOO CUTE and i need 2 stay up especially wit my homework (teacher's are merciless. bakura, go maul Dr. Nashban. *bakura jumps up and down and runs off 2 do wat he does best...kill people.And steal. heh heh*). so i just cuaght up with reading chapters 4&5 and throughout the whole thing i can c u laughing hysterically just torturing anyone who has a body and knows ryou. u. r. soooooo. evil. me likey! it makes it interesting. i feel sorry 4 marik. with his sexy back(yea!) all cause them other boys don't know how to act(yea!). i also think it's special wat's behind ryou and ahmose's back(that tong idea is just hott)yea. they can turn around and i'll pick up the slack(yea. take um 2 the bridge).their turned into dirty babes. you see those shackles now there slaves. they get whipped if they misbehave. no one's every made them feel this way. you can take it 2 the chrorus ( i love 'sexy back' and 'my love'!!!!!).i wonder wat's gonna happen 2 bakura when he gets 2 the palace.if he does. i kno ur gonna torure him so i can't say he won't end up in the palace of doom! lol! while i'm thinkin i'll go dance wit wolf cub bakura to 'chicken noodle soup'. LET IT RAIN AND CLEAR IT UP!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN