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OMG!!! the long awaited update has arrived!! on halloween night 2! i couldn't update yesterday cuz i went trick o treating with my little brother ( 2 me u'r never 2 old 2 trick o treat....as long as u don't do it when ur 30. u'll probably be supected of trick o treating for kids and not candy). 4give me. i just had 2 flaunt the pirate outfit i has wearing. neway... i REALLY lik this chapter although u seemed 2 have put marik through MORE torture than before. first ryou then marik? make up your mind!! ryou seemed a little bit like an asshole in this chapter even when he found out y marik was stalking him but then again it's still reasonable cuz any other person would react that way 2. except 4 me. i'll let marik in with open arms. with his sexy self. hehehe. i just hope that ryou remembers and he and marik get back 2gether cuz the anticipation is just 2 much 4 me. as i was reading the chapter, i felt so much anticipation that my gut almost busted and mind you i was eating candy (i regretted that like an hour ago when i got the worst stomach ache known 2 man). the funniest part of the chapter was when ishizu starts beating up on marik. it's also funny that he ends up in the slammers twice 4 wat seem to be less than 1 or 2 days. neway im gonna go read this article i found on wikipedia about bakura. i heart wikipedia. a lot. UPDATE!!!! I CAN'T TAKE THE ANTICIPATION ANY MORE!! IT'S SQUISHING MY PANCREAS!!!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

Ooh wow, I'm teary eyed w/ sympathy and from laughter. XD I love this story, so dramatic and funny even in the mist of angst. Poor Mariku, poor guy. And poor Ryou too, what a hard life. *huggles* Yay for the reincarnation of Ryou! Heh, Ryou's getting chased by a naked psycho who claims to love him, priceless.

Seto and Pegasus got turned into genies for their greed! Whoot! And yay for Ahmose kicking ass! *snickers* Showers and sex in a public place; even the gods are teasing him. XD Gotta love that. ^_^ Anubis is a pretty well portrayed character; funny and sympathetic. And of course, dear Yami and his remarks are as humorous as ever.

Sort of hard to summarize a review for for like I dunno 5-7 ch in such a limited time, but I really apologize for not reviewing since Sept. I'm horribly behind. I've been busy like crazy. @_@ I'm really glad to finally get a chance to catch up on this story. It's very nicely written and very intriguing. I'm definitely enjoying the story and I'm looking forward to see what's going to happen to Mariku and Ryou now. Can't wait til the next ch, but I have no idea when I'll be reading/reviewing it, but hopefully soon. See ya. ^_~

Okay, I spent this chapter either laughing my ass off or trying not to cry. Hands down my favorite moment was the Ahmose and Anubis interaction. Anubis may be the God of Death but he's a really ~cool~ God. Especially when he's getting told what to do by his mother ROTFL, seriously classic moment. Eh, you know my spazzes well enough now to know that basically any Ahmose time is good for me, especially if he's getting pounced on by a pervy Yami or teased by his God (Still laughing!!!)

However, there is the rest of the chapter to contend with. Oh my lord, I had this overwhelming urge to dive into the fic and hit Marik really really hard (then hide behind Ahmose, I haven't got magic to stop myself from dying!) for what he's doing. Ryou would ~not~ have wanted him to do that and most certainly would have been pissed about it. But on that note you just had to throw us another curveball, Ryou's back but doesn't remember a thing? Dang this is gonna be trouble!

Velvetina

Kudos for the ...... ug.... creative ending. I really didn't expect that. For doing the unexpected I gift you with the award of most original plot in yaoi fanfiction that didn't meet the reader's hypothesis on the story. Nice job! My mind runs in circles waiting for your next update.......... Oh! An I recomend the story, the Segull's laugh. It's very good but only comes in Icelandic w/ english subtitles. ^.^0 yeah. Please tell me what you think of it and I'll check in later.

oh sure bring ryou back without his memories. i have a feeling that u enjoy complicating ur stories. oh well...update soon.

Lines like this... "He'd lashed Ahmose for his misdeeds, and embarrassed the hell out of him at the same time. It was a good night." and this..."It's fuckin 10 am...” Bakura growled. "Who the fuck has the BALLS to call me before NOON?!” and this..."I feel like my dick should be wearing a tie...” got me cracking up 4 the longest tyme. lmfao! it was soooo funny. i loved it. wow i never thought that marik would stoop that low because of ryou. and even worse, when ryou was reincarnated... HE COULDN'T REMEMBER MARIK!! way 2 add to that torture hato. good job. i was expecting that. a little. i actually though u were gonna make way 4 a small happy ending. Then again, i remember u saying before by "accident" that marik would get arrested but i didn't think it would be like this. good. fucking. job.... brillient. u r SUCH a little meanie. again i imagine u laughin like no man's business because of the way u torture this poor heart broken man. it kinda makes me laf 2 actually. hehehehe. HAHAHAH!!! it was actually funny that marik ran after ryou...NAKED. i would defiently want 2 see that!! u kno that crowd was there only because marik was naked and they loved staring at his sexy body. anyway... i do hope that ryou remembers marik soon or else *sighs* i'm just gonna have ta help em. *glances at baseball bat in the corner*. i've been meaning 2 use that anyway. well now i'm gonna go and make my halloween custom. i'm gonna be a pirate. argh baby. lol.

Much Love From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

MMMMrrrrrrrooooooooooooororoororororroowwwwwwwwwwwwww. =^^= Thank you for yet another wonderful chapter. I think that you're an exelenct autor and should be reconized. If some sort of contest were to be going on about the most creative fan fics of yu-gi-oh! involving fantasy; I would nominate you. Please keep up the good work and thanks again!!

*carving ryou's tombstone and crying hysterycally* this is 4 my baby ryou. we loved him so. *plays "pearls" by Sade and crys even more* this chapter... I KNEW THIS WAS THE CHAPTER!! *WAILS*....wait a minute... wait wait wait wait. did u say ryou WAS dead? wat the fuck? u wanna tell me i've been crying ova nothing?!! o well who cares this chapter was soooooo good and the thought of ryou looking like freddy kruger gave birth 2 him gives me a reason to not be able 2 sleep 2nite. SCARY MUCH!? YES!! i love malik's entry into the story though. that was funny. you always kno how 2 make their entrances so funny. and yami...omg that mofo just stays funny especially his comment at the end... and at the worst tyme 2!! but i feel soooo sorry 4 marik. the poor man. 4 a second tyme 2. it's just soo sad. u made me go from being mad happy that that bitch "new york" was not picked (AGAIN!!! HA!) in Flavor of love to being upset that ryou's gone and mariks sad and cryng. but u made me madd happy again when those asswipes pegasus and seto got there shit real good.i've been waiting 4 TOO LONG! it's about fucking tyme. i love ahmose. with his sexy ass.he gave it 2 them good. but now i think he got Anubis pissed again. how's the crew gonna get ryou back? THEY BETTER GET HIM BACK CUZ I KNO YOU'RE GONNA WANNA PROLONG THE TOTURE AND SAY 'WE AIN'T GETTIN HIM BACK'. MEANIE. LOL. anyway must sleep scholl tomorrow. peace out!!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

O.O..... **speachless.... pulls out a piece of paper** Ways to kill an Author or Two: #1. Gut them, #2... **She glares at the authors** HOW COULD YOU!!! BRING HIM BACK ELSE THIS LIST IS FINISHED AND ALL OF US READERS TRY OUT EACH ONE!! CURSE YOU!! **cries and continues the list.... turns around with a smile** ^__^ Great chapter though. I could just see Malik wearing a yellow one like that too! The small scene with him and Bakura was touching. Great chapter and hurry on with more. **evil angry glint returns** I'll kill you... >[

~ChibiRinni ^.^... >[

Hey, I am ~so~ sorry that I haven't been reviewing recently but I have been pretty seriously ill and moving, even to the computer, was just not an option. **Pout** Apparently being a wombat doesn't save me from sickness.

However, now I am up again (sorta) what a kickass couple of chapters to come back to. Seriously dude its amazing. I loved the torture, though poor Ahmose...at least he's managed to get back at Pegasus and Seto in a truely evil manner. Gods I love him when he goes into AE Magic mode, though how much is Anubis gonna kick his ass?

As for Ryou in general O.o WUDFIHFPEIJAGOIHCFEWPJ! Holy shit, that was one pissed genie. What the heck is Marik gonna do now? Are they gonna get him back or take a holiday to the land of the dead (unlikely but I never know with you).

I really, really wanna know what happens next now I'm all caught up. Mainly how is Yami going to react to Ahmose's sacrifice? Will Malik find out about Bakura and Marik? What are they going to do with their new genies? And how much Tex Mex is Ahmose gonna eat whilst trying to deal with it all?

**Laugh** I'm happy to be back.