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Like I said in Twilight Menagerie, I'm sorry for not reviewing. I love this so much. I promise to try to do better.

AWWWW COME ON!!! it doesn't hurt 2 let marik and bakura loose in the south bronx! they'll practically mix right in. nothing in new york will change enyway. u and me both know that the south bronx can't get any worse than it already is. and as 4 scaring my teacher and class...sweety i accomplished scaring the crap outta them a long ass tyme ago.lmfao.OOOOOKAY now about the fic. i can see that you PROBABLY stopped torturing ryou 4 a while but now the torture has hit Marik cuz if he finds out that ryou got his memmories back and probably won't wanna b wit him cuz of his recent stupid behavior ( which i really don't blame him 4 cuz if i where him, i'd b pissed at marik 2) marik will definetly shot him self or something and i bet thats where ur aiming at which makes me laugh for some reason but then again mayb thats not where ur aiming at and ur still torturing ryou cuz u know that if marik dies ryou will be upset and depressed 4 tha rest of his life *takes a breath* aaaand u'll b laughing in the background cuz ryou's been all around fucked over since the beginning of the story and u knew that and he didn't. *takes breath*. wow. anyway, i luv that "asscrack of dawn" comment that yami made. lol. he's funny in the morning. yeah i look like something out of the thriller video in the morning. i even sound like something out of the thriller video in the morning. neway i must go study biologia. can't wait till the next chapter!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
O!! and what do mean that the wolf cub and the lion cub won't show up *YET*?!?!?! i miss my babies. and this might be random but i have 2 say it.... WATCH BORAT AND NOT SO MUCH SAW 3 it was boring in the middle.

*waves sheepishly* I'm not very good at reviewing so I don't often do it. XD And I suck ass to only be doing it after you've BEGGED, but I am! I really love a lot of your stories and the joint ones, like this one. Though honestly, I had trouble getting into the first part of this one, then one day, while I was reading through, I found myself hooked! XD Funny how that happens.

I will be keeping up with this story! I promise! Along with Twighlight Menagrie, which I'll try to remember to leave a review on as well. So, even if I don't review every chapter, I'm still here! I'll make sure to review when something sticks out at me from now on. XD I know how awesome it is to get reviews, no matter how small they are. lol I posted a new very short OS last night and I was refreshing every hour to see if I had a review or if the count went up on it. XD I'm so sad... lmao

Any...ways! Keep up the good writing! ^_^

I like your stories and love to read them, especially part two of "I Dream of Ryou." But, I would greatly appreciate it if you would explain something in the story. Maybe before or after a chapter you could explain how Ryou is mortal and a genie. I honestly thought that genies are immortal or mortals can't be genies. Also I'd like to point out that Anubis made him mortal so the bottle shouldn't be tied to him. Please, please, explain this strange occurrence to me in your next chapter, please.

Oh man, I only hope that Ryou is back to his old self with his memory of Mariku, so that the two of them can finally live in peace together. heh heh, which knowing your guys' writing style, it won't last very long and that is if it happens in the next ch. XD

Anyways, poor guy, Mariku was really hitting it hard, sunk to the very bottom of a dark hole. And yeah, Ryou had a quite an attitude, but then again you can't blame him, Mariku's physical and mental state plus the supernatural occurings would not make anyone in Ryou's circumstance believe him.

And of course, seeing Ahmose squirm under Yami's commentary is, as always, quite entertaining. Well, I definitely look forward to the next installment, till then, hopefully. ^_~

wow. HIV? i didn't think that marik hit rock bottom like that. well at least ryou's coming back...i hope. i have this feeling that ryou's either never gonna wake up or anubis won't let him or that ryou would wake up and still not have his memories. i have this feeling because you're *SO* good with torturing the characters and your readers. not that we mind really. *lol in a really tired manner.* 4 some reason i really wanted ahmose to lik scare ryou into remembering or cooperating with them. i really wanted him 2 get in this 'hey i'm from the south bronx and imma kill u and yo whole damn family bitch and i don't giv a flying shit wat u think.' attitude with ryou in the alley and THEN zap some magic on him. it's a little 2 bakura and marik (cuz bakura and marik would be thrilled 2 live in the south bronx. they'll practically call it paradise.) but i think it would have been so cool. or mayb you're just rubbing off on me and i now have the urge to c ryou tortured whenever i can. as a matter of fact u R rubbing off on me. my teacher wanted us to stage different ways in which 2 torch prometheus in 'Prometheus Bound' and my imagination ran wild. he thought i was evil and amusing. so did the rest of the class. neway i felt that this chapter was another calming before the storm because I KNOW and i actually spelled 'know' right cuz I KNOW something big is gonna happen. and it better be the return of the lion cub and the wolf cub cuz i miss the hell outta them. *sighs* o i'm tired skools killing me so i'll sleep...which is wierd cuz it's like 9:10 at nite, i have no skoll tomorrow and i never go to bed early when there's no skool the next day. or when there's skool anyway. but imma sleep any ways. nitey nite.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

HOMG poor Marik. T_T The poor guy's just dying there...I can't help but feel slightly disappointed in Ryou for giving up on him so quickly...or at least being so stubborn. -hits Ryou- Bad Ryou! Geez...oh well, I hope that when he gets his memory back, things will get better. Marik still loves him so much, the big lug...

I'm amazed how quickly Marik can just jump into drugs...it's only been 3 months and he's like...doing everything on the face of this planet..I'm surprised he hasn't actually died yet. -sniffles- But poor Marik..you'd think if he saw somsone like Ryou he'd try to be the old Marik to win Ryou back...poor Marik.

...Bad Ryou!

Hope to see more fics from you soon!

I was really really really hoping that Ryou would just sit down with Marik and talk...but I guess it's really hard to do when Marik's in this state of mind...poor guy. Ryou needs to give him a hug. If it was the other way around, I bet Ryou would really take care of Marik, rather than just let Marik be. Homg. You should get Ryou get his memoires back and make Marik forget his. OUCH BURN. THEN Ryou will feel bad, won't he?

Great chapter. Poor Ryou and Marik...

Wow, Aniras and I have been out of co-mish for a bit. ^.^;; Glad to come back to this story though! I was in near tears! Please help Marik! PLEASE! I just want everything to be ok in the end! ^__^ Please???

~ChibiRinni ^.~

thanks for updating both this and Twilight Mingrine. I enjoy virtualy all your stories, and I'm sure that I will continue to enjoy them. Right now thought I've got a pile of work wating for me to complete it before the deadline of *looks at clock* um, 8:10 this morning. Untill next time.