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T_T Once again, I know Ryou's stubborn, and I know Ryou's hurt, but >< >< >< >< >< >< >< >< >< >< Homg, I just want to smack him in the head. mkay, the guy broke his promise, but do you have to stoop as low as him to even retort things like that back to him? He's hurting too; you're both hurting, at least Marik's TRYING to make things better and you're just snuffling away thinking that maybe if you love someone else all this will go away...cheap Ryou, cheap.

After all, remember who promised they'd love their master forever because the master set him free?
Remember who proimsed they'd love their master no matter what?

-_- And Marik has a point. Ryou broke his promise to Marik first to let himeslf be destroyed. He didn't even give Marik a chance to make up for his little mishap with Bakura. And how easily did Ryou expect Marik to take his death like -snap- that? >_>: Someone has a little too high standard for Marik...

I used to pity Ryou and was upset at Marik, but it's slowly turning the other way around. Ryou's acting like a big stubborn baby. At least Marik's trying. You gotta give him credit for that. And it's just low to rub your new boyfriend like that Ryou, just low...like as if Marik isn't hurting all ready...

-_- Yeah, as you can see, I'm very unhappy with Ryou right now. Marik should just give up on Ryou and see how he likes it. Betcha Ryou would be hurt too and be coming back to complain. ><

Very emotional chapter. I hope things start looking up soon with Marik and Ryou.

FINALLY!! AFTER WHAT FELT LIK A YEAR OF WAITING!! AN UPDATE!! O ok ok i guess the south bronx isn't 4 them.... Bed-stuy then. anyway... WOW. Ryou really knows how to spoil some1's christmas.wat a bummer. if it was me i would hav snuffed him 4 that. he's lucky that marik's deeply in love wit him cuz any other guy would be like "u kno wat fuck this shit. 2 hell wit this and 2 hell wit u". i understand that wat marik did was stupid but i think ryou's 4getting the fact that marik's human and it's hard 2 hav 2 deal wit losing some1 one u luv. he needs 2 stop bitching. but from wat i c in this chapter i take it that u r enjoying torturing someone. AS USUAL. neway... lil missy get bac here! U LET SOMETHING SLIP. AGAIN!! spill it now. whose shooting themselves? i want the whos, whys, whats, and hows on this. i'm guessing ryou since u like toturing him or mayb ur tricking me and it IS marik. or mayb it's someone unexpected like... yugi or mikado. yo no se pero this is getting me excited!! i can't wait 4 that next chappie!!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

O_o; That was really mean of Ryou to do! "I'm giving a love string to someone else! >:D" Meanie!

T_T Poor Marik. He need a really big hug! Ryou needs to be pushed naked in the snow with sevral horny old men about. That'll teach him! ^_~ And I'll be happy too! >:D

Lovely ch, and of course everything is NOT fine and dandy even w/ Ryou's memories back, XD. Whenever one character is tormented, the other one seems to be picked up and tormented. Seems like Mariku's turn of torture has not dissipitated yet, yep, still his turn. Poor guy, hope Ryou'll be able to forgive him at the right moment. He was wrong to be unfaithful to his promises, but he was trully in agony over the lost of Ryou. *huggles them*

But nonetheless, quite humorous at times, like when Ryou was dragging a balcony with him and when Yami commented that the alarm was set to the "asscrack of dawn", those are some memorable times of laughter. ^^

Well, of course I'm looking forward to your next ch, I only hope I am able to read/review it in a timely fashion. See ya. ^_~

awww poor ryou. poor poor thing. cant wait till next chappie! so excited! yay!

I usually make it a point not to review people's work for some reason, but seeing as you've been one of my favorite authors for *quite* some time now, I suppose I can make an exception just for you. ^_~

They way you manage to take characters *completely* AU and still make the story work to the point of me being able to easily imagine the scenery and such in my mind is definitely praise-worthy. I love the way you wrote Seto in this story. asshole!Seto is teh sex. ^^

And you know, I've never really like Ryou. Or Malik. Or Marik, for that matter. (Bakura though. DAMN. He's too badass and sexy NOT to love him.) But despite it all, I keep coming back for more of them in your work. YOu write them in a way that makes them...dare I say it? *LOVEABLE* Your work on this story, along with The Jungle and Twilight Menagerie (With Mally-chan, I believe?) And the characterizations of Ryou and the gang is wonderful.

I hope to see much more of your work in the future, and who knows? Maybe I'll break and give you some more reviews. I think Vengeance of Sethos deserves some praise...

Sorry if I haven't been updating as often! The holidays are comming up, plans are being put into motion, money spent for presents, relatives poping on the doorstep anouncing that they're going to stay, and plenty of work to be done. I'ts that busy time of yr. Anyway, I hope that I havn't been neglecting reviewing any of your work and if I have, then I'm truly sorry for it. I hope that you enjoy the holidays, and treat yourself to a feast this thanksgiving.

Nuuuuu....I thought Ryou would forgive Marik for all that he did...I mean, I know that Marik didn't keep his promises, but still...imagien being the one having his loved one torn away from him for the THIRD time in forever!

Poor Ryou; I know he must be disheartened that Marik slept with Bakura, but Marik didn't mean it...I mean, Marik's done so many more things to prove that he's in love with Ryou and would do anythign for Ryou. Isn't htat more than enough to tide over for one mistake? And plus, both of them have alreayd said that they don't love each other...and Marik's hurt himself hundreds of times for Ryou's sake...and he freed Ryou too...

T-T I know Ryou's sensitive, but I'm hoping that he'll come and approach Marik first..in teh state that Marik's in right now, he seems so weak and so easy to shatter. I hope Ryou will go to Marik soon.

Update again!

Ray: "I LOVE THIS STORY!! Amazing!! Poor Ryou, he's so sad about the way his lover has been acting!!"

Roxria: *Bashes Marik over the head with baseball bat* "Stop being so stupid, Marik!! Damn, just TRY and be patient for once."

Ray: *Sweat drop* "Love the story!! I'll keep reviewing if you keep posting!!!"

Ouch, Ryou sure is bitter... at least Marik wasn't there to hear that.