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for Tales of Arabian Nights

by hatochiisai

person Jeda
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ANYWAY... i liked this chapter(even though there was that evil cliffy at the end). this chapter was the 'omg it's about FUCKING TYME!!!' chapter. and baby cub marik was in it!! YAAA!!! i like him being a baby than being all grown up. marik makes a cute lion cub. and i told u last tyme that ryou should have turned that nurse bitch into a turd. she acts like a turd. i'm happy ryou didn't get arrested though. so as marik. anyway i will end this review by saying thank u 4 updating and merry christmas and happy new year!!

Much Luv From Nyc~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Aww they are so cute... and lucky that Ahmose didn't stab someone... ^_^ I just want to hug them!

Hee hee, Ryou and his bunnies...
person blaj
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bjla I think that your fic is coo updat soon
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ YAY! Go Marik; finish your knot! *is very happy*
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry bout the poopy-heads... It was the worst I could come up with at the time. Still, they both are. I can't wait for more!
person A:
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nenenenenenenenennenenenennenen that reminds me..."Ryou hasn't felt teh death of a loved one." He nearly felt it in this chapter, didn't he? No matter what he says about loving Ootogi more about finishing his knot, I bet if Marik died he'd realize just how much he misses Marik. >< And it's so silly for him to keep on denying Marik's insistence of dying for him...oh well, he was kinder in this episode, and not as stubborn. He even said "I love you" a few tiems> i bet htat really counts for something. Marik should remember those words and continue making his knots; it's so obvious that Ryou loves him.

person jeda
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O I LIKED THAT HOSPITAL SCENE VERY MUCH INDEED!! but i didn't like that bitchy nurse. i wish ryou would have turned her into turd. *giggles* niiiice. and SQUEEEEEEEEEEE!!! LION CUB MARIK IS BACK!!! HAPPY? YES!!! VERY MUCH!!! i hope marik finishes that love knot 4 ryou. oooooo this chapter was a great early christmas present. what wasn't a great early christmas present was to hear that u'll b gone from dec 17 till jan. 10. it's almost devestating. BUT!! then again u have a family and a life and family and life comes first and indeed if your mom saw aff on the PC's history, armaggedoen might come about. my mom would DEFINETLY b the same way. as a matter of fact she might drown me in gravy. her gravy is awesome. mmmm gravy. and mashed potatoes. and chicken.... OKAY I'M GOING OFF TRACK HERE!! SORRY!! neway. i was estatic 2 c this update and i can't wait 4 the next 1!! Have A Merry Christmas Dear. and An AWESOME New Year. u should go 2 Time Square 4 that it's madd krazy.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~

lil mIss drAma QUEEN




person Uke_lovechid
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story, a little over angsty but good none the less.
person icefox
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am lovin' your stories more and more. keep up the good work. ^^ question, why is it that in pernear all of your fics ryou, malik, and there yami's are always tortured? i like all the angsty stuff too, but it's always them. and when it's someone else, you don't write much of it. like, in twilight minagerie(did i spell that write?) i thought that the person you were talking about in the review, that was going to be scarred for life, was going to be either seto or yami because nothing bad has really happened to them. they just stood in the sidelines as they worried about everyone else. in the review you were talking about ryou or marik, weren't you? ok, now i'm getting into the wrong story on the review. sorry, gunna need to work on that. ^^() anyways... this chapter is really good, just like the others, though i'm a little worried about marik...O.O until next time! ^^
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say... I loved the chapter, but it's soooo sad. I think both of them are being poopy-heads! I can see why Ryou's upset, but I see things that he did wrong too. And that whole thing about the fridge was such a wonderfully morbid image! Bravo!!