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Wow. this chappie was really funny. i LUV tuc and nod. their so cute and tuc truly is the monty python rabbit. lol. and ryou's fat ass was stuck in the bottle. lmao! of course no 1 in the story found bakura's comment funny but i sure did. i realized that marik said 'awwwww' a lot in this chapter. it was sorta wierd cuz he doesn't do that all the tyme. mayb he's just whiny and sexually frustrated. well obviously he is pero i think that would explain y he says 'awwww' a lot in this chappie. i also realize that ryou sleeps more than my brother and that only means one thing....he needs a fuckin job. i also liked the part wit the fridge and the magazine. that was wonderful. it was hilarious. marik could defiently make a billion copies of those and make madd money. pero that'll b cruel 2 ryou. i'm also wondering if ahmose is just sick from jet lagg..... OR MAYB HE'S PREGNANT!!!.......jk. i'm playin. i'm playin. anyway, u've managed 2 make my week worth while again and i can't wait 4 the next update!

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
P.S. when's marik & ryou's wedding?

I will never get enough of Yami and Ahmose! And I hope for Marik's sake the wedding comes quickly. And I feel bad for Yami and Ahmose. They have to pay so long for a mistake...

-_-; Wanted to kill Ryou again!? O_o; Greh... I think he has died too much already... >.> XO How could someone attack Ryou like that?

Aww, poor hysterical Ahmose! He needs a big hug! *glomps*

NOW...I kno ryou's not dead. if he is, i'll hav mally's head (that was an unintentional ryhme... but it was mad nice right). he cannot b dead. i reallly don't want marik 2 go through hell again. HE CAN'T B DEAD!!!! *breaths* it's ok. i kno he's not dead. u talked 2 mally 4 15 minutes about it rite?... rite? *twitches*. he's just unconscious i'm sure he's fine. HE BETTER BE FINE!!! neway i can't wait 4 the next update cuz i wanna kno what's gonna happen and wat ahmose and yami could do since ryou's not responding cuz that's all that's wrong. he's not responding. and i luv the fact that ahmose had to talk 2 anubis all decked out in leather with a vibrator up his has. it's priceless. neway update.i can't wait till the next chapter where RYOU IS ALIVE!!!

Much Luv From Nyc~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
I'M WATCHING THE SUPER BOWL & IT'S SOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!! GO COLTS!!! EVEN THOUGH THE BEARS ARE PREETY HOT... BUT GOOOO MANNING!!

I love this fic and the previous, it rocked, and so does this one, but before i go onto read the next chappie i just have to say:
Yami [as much as i love him] is a total Dick! He really needs to show some compassion to Ahmose. Yeah ok, he wants him to open up and be more expressive. But seriously, it quite obv that Yami is the male figure in this relationship so he should be wrapped around Ahmose's finger. Power to Ahmose! Resist and be yourself, if he loves you, he should love you as you are. you don't have to change or become his slave for his sake, he's not Pharaoh any more. Though gifts are nice, surprise him if you want to, not cos you feel obliged.
My point is Yami should be begging forgiveness not Ahmose
Love the story!
And yes i do know they are not real charracters

aww, so much more cuter and romantic on Yami's behalf. as long as he doesn't go psyhco control bitch mode on Ahmose again, he's forgiven.

I'm happier now... but Ryou's treatment of Marik's 'desire' was really starting to piss me off. Still this chapter was really cute! Especially Ahmose; those poor random people! They only get to look... no touchy... XD

Hey it's me jeda! i'm happy u updated cuz i was slowly dying of bordom and the wheather in new york is so crazy i don't even wanna go out. it's like mother nature is PMSing. it was 70 degrees 2 weeks ago now its like 30. anyway, i'm a little confuzzled about when marik and ryou r gettin married and how long marik had been going through his sexual frustration. is it 3 months or 6 months? i just wanna see how long marik can hold out. it's kinda funny. And i see that lion cub marik has made it's appearance once again. HE'S CUTTER THAN THOSE BUNNIES!!. *squeels* i see yami and ahmose have found ryou's wedding present and also a good place to have fun while there getting it on. they should go to Brazil. that's a fun place to go if u wanna have good sex. and Brazilians r fuckin hott. anyway i like this chapter and i'm glad that amhose didn't die in that car crash cuz i'd cry if that happened.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN

LOL!!!! I'm not surprised that you named them Tuc and Nod but it is funny! Poor Marik....

Hey UR BACK!!! I'M HAPPY NOW!! i hope u had a happy new year. anyway i really liked this chapter cuz after going through two fics of everyone kinda telling ahmose 2 lossen up, (i mean we're talking from Yami 2 Anubis here)... i think this was about damn time. the only thing the fic is missing is THE REST OF THE LEMON!! i also liked this chappie cuz it focused more on Ahmose and Yami. It was kinda sweet. Especially that "kinda, sorta, supposed to be" proposal yami made to ahmose. i can't wait till these people get married!! it's gonna b so cute especially marik and ryou's wedding.

Much Luv From NYC~.~.~.~.~.~
lil mIss drAMa QUEEN