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for Don´t Let Go

by LeilaLogan

person dragonlady222
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Their first kiss! How sweet and Seth is jealous. Maybe he should just try that with Jou. The worm is gross I hope they all make it into the temple. Good chapter.
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If it's a PKMON BATTLE YOU WANt...A PKMON BATTLE YOU WILL GET!!

*Sends out all her 1000, level 100 pokemon* *smirks* Beat this? I dare you! Come on BRING IT!! GROUDON, BLASTIOSE, SYCTHER, BLAZIKEN, KYROGE, RAYQUAZA, PICHU, PLUSLE, MINUN, TOGEPIE, BUTTERFREE, CHARIZARD, BAYLEAF, FERLATIGATOR, DITTO, DRAGONITE, FLYGON, ESPEON, UMBREON, AERODADACTYL METAGROSS, HITMONCHAN, HITMONLEE, DARK RAICHU, MIGHTYENA, CASTFORM, NUZLEAF

ETC!! GO GO GO!!

Bakura: Whoa Millie chill hon...

Freddie: Aww you know Millie once challanged she'll never back down.

Marik: *nods*

Freddie: Remember that time She turned a wild red Gyrados tame?

Marik: Hell yea...that was cool...stupid...but cool

*growls* COME ON BRING IT!! FIREDRAGON, I CHOOSE YOU!!

Red Gyrados: RRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!

THAT's MY BOY!! NOW LET'S DIG THIS BITCH!!

Marik: HOLD IT!!!

*grumbles* WHAT NOW??!!!

Marik: Chill hon, you know the author can do whatever she likes to you?

So?! I'm Lord of Darkness! I can do whatever I like

Bakura: I love it when she's stubborn...

Freddie: Right behind ya babe

*smirk*

Marik: So am I....

*smirks* ARE YOU SURE YOU WANNA TRY AND BEAT ME??!! I do have three Psychopaths backing me up...and Did I mention Im Psycho too?! SO BACK OFF!!!
person REYGURL
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CHAPTER I CANT BELIEVE SETO HIT HIM HES SO MEAN!!!!!!NEWAYZ PLZ UPDATE
person zoe
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter hope that they find each other again. Whats with Seth being all mean? I know that Jou kind of back talked him but its not enough for Seth to start hitting him. Hope you update soon
person Sekre
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'll admit, I only clicked on your story because I wanted some SJ and there was nothing else to read - As, I really only care for BakuRyou and SetoJou ... but as I started reading your story, I got hooked on AtemuYugi :) They're just so cute together... and even though I'm happiest when Seto and Jou come around (they're one of my otps ^^) , your fic really motivated me to get into the YxYY pairing, when usually I'm indifferent to them. Wonderful job - Will be awaiting the next chapter.
person lokivsanubis
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more!! Update soon!
person lokivsanubis
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let Yugi and Yami kiss already!! UPdate soon!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OW MY EARS!!! WILL PEOPLE PLEASE STOP SHOUTING!!

Marik: Er...Millie...

I KNOW I'M SHOUTING!! Ow my head!

Bakura: *Shakes head* Okay Ishtar...lets go and rob some stuff from the Pharoah's father

Too predictable, Baku-Chan, Mariku, What about stealing Yugi?

Marik: *grins* That would be funny except one thing: The puzzle!

We steal that first...

Marik: Let's go then...

FIRESTALLION I CHOOSE YOU!

Bakura: What is that?

Rapidash!

You guys better ride Ponyta's...their slightly less dangerous

Bakura and Marik: ...........

^___^ It's called fighting fire with fire...and magic with magic!!

person dragonlady222
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Too bad Atem couldn't make Sovok suffer a little more. Poor Teana now she is a mind slave to Dakuso. I loved the chapter.
person zoe
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I hope that the team figgurs that Taia has been brain washed. OHHHHHH they were sooo close to kissing, well mabey next chapter.