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for Don´t Let Go

by LeilaLogan

person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...she updated...*puts away Mr.Sharp and Pionty*

Marik: Bakura...*growls*

Guys? Must you do that while I'm trying to read? AND IF YOU GET CUM ON MY COMPUTER AGAIN I WILL LOCK YOU UP APART!!

Bakura: Try us Milz

FREDDDIE!! GET THE HANDCUFFS!!! AND THE LEG CUFFS

Freddie: No..

*narrows eyes and smiles sweetly*

Marik, Bakura and Freddie: *run and lock themselves away*

*shrugs and locks herself up*

15 mins later..

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Err guys?

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Guys? I've kinda lost the key..

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! GUYS COME BACK

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person zoe
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thanks for clearing the hole eye key thing up ^_^

YAY there all free, allthough Teana cheated, so in my opinion Jou was the first to break free. Cant wait to see what happens next week so hope you have fun writing
person catti-dono
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay...not so violent this time since there were no threats...love the story....cannot wait for the next update...I saw nothing that really needed to be beta'd...it read very well...catti
person REYGURL
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT A GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!CANT WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE
person REYGURL
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT A GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!CANT WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE
person SpufFan
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! It's good I swear! And I hope you get more reviews this time! As well as continuing to update every week!
person lokivsanubis
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, sorry i haven't reviewed recently, i've been really busy but i'm happy this update is so good. UPdate soon!! I'll be waiting!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON OR MY DRAGONS +My DAGGER +BAKURA +Freddie +Marik WILL GET MEDIVAL ON YOUR ASS SO MOVE YOURE ASS AND UPDATE
person reygurl
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!i know its gonna be good plz update!!!!!!
person Jackie
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...cliffhangers...EVIL! BUT, I enjoy where this is going. Good story! :)

Now...on with the sweet sweet love making. (juuust kidding)

But really, I do enjoy this and I will be back to read whatever you post next. :D