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for Don´t Let Go

by LeilaLogan

person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DID SHE JUST TELL ME TO BEHAVE???!!! OHHH......NOW I'M MAD!!!

Freddie: *sweatdrops* This author isn't going to last very long...

Bakura: Warning: Never make Millie Mad...

Marik: *shudders* I'm still not allowed to have sex with Bakura am I??

*smirks* HELL NO!!! unless you want to go without sex for a whole year....and you I'd do it!!!

Freddie: seems harsh watch did you guys do?

Bakura: cameonherlaptopPC

Freddie: *gulps* Remind never to piss off Millie

*Marik nods voilently*

That's it...I'm GOING TO PUT YOU IN THE SEA....VENOM!!! DROWN HER!!! *smirks*

Author: HELLPPP!!!

ARE YOU SORRY??

Auhor *cries* yes...

*smirks* good!! ^____^
person Koorime13
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! It wuz time^^ Aaah... had so much fun reading this story! You're an incredible author and know how to humor your readers^^ I wish and pray to all the gods up there to make you update asap!!! This is practicaly the first YuugixAtemu fic I've read and I'm glad it started guud^^ Actually better than guud^^ Too bad it ended in a cliffy... :S Oh well^^ Great job and hope you update soon^^
Ja ne
person SpufFan
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh OOh OOh can I? Please can i kill you Iwas so aout to be like-See ya! Anway keep up the updating!
person wintermoon
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, to be perfectly honest, I just found this site yesterday (along with your story-which I read all the way through in one sitting), and needless to say I'm hooked! That being said, I only have one problem.....the cliffhanger!!! I mean, just HOW could you leave us (and Yuugi) hanging like that?! I know there has to be something else at work besides evil plot bunnies, because this is cruel. I mean, someone HAS to be controlling them,right?!

*begins looking around for banishing gun*
I know Sanzo left it here somewhere...
Hmmm... Found it!!
Now, if I can just find the bullets...

Seriously though, love the fic! Look forward to the next chapter!! Actually, I'll probably be checking it constantly just in case you update early:)

Sorry for the Saiyuki reference, I'm a big fan and just couldn't resist! :)



person lokivsanubis
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know i finally get a chance to read your fic and what to i find a Cliffy. Oh well it keeps me coming back. Don't kill YUGI or horrible things may happen. UPdate soon
person REYGURL
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!THEY KISSED FINALY YAY!!!!^-^!!!!!!GREAT CHAPTER CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!!OH AND YOUR GREAT!!!!!I LOVE YOU STORY!!!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*looks for a spoon* LOOK A SPORK!! I SHALL DIG A TUNNEL THEN I SHALL KILL YOU FOR KILLING YUGI

Marik, Bakura and Freddie: Why us?

NOT YOU!! THIS AUTHOR

Marik, Bakura and Freddie: It's only fanfiction....

I DON'T CARE!!

Bakura: Poor Milliekins

Marik Freddie and I: *raise eyebrows* That's spooky...

Bakura are you feeling alright....

Bakura: I feel a fever coming on..

*checks head* He's right...oh well...*digs the tunnel* I'm FREEE YAY!!!

Freddie: *gulps*

Marik: *also gulps*

Bakura *groans*

MWUHAHAHAAAA!! I'm going to caue havoc and mayhem

Freddie, Bakura and Marik: Belive us Ishy-Motou you already do that

-_-!!
person dragonlady222
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yuugi, at least he's not dead, yet. Good chapter. The spy is gone and hopefully Dakuso is soon to follow.
person SpufFan
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Howdy Howdy! It's cool if it's a day late, I don't check it that religiously. Just don't go for weeks at a time, like another author I'm trying to get to update, please?
person dragonlady222
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I wonder what Teana is planning. I know she is not strong enough for the God tablets probably not even with Dakuso's help. She couldn't even pass the test alone.
I'm glad they all passed the test.