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for Don´t Let Go

by LeilaLogan

person mother lemur
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love your story!!

But you really shouldn't put Japanese words into an Ancient Egyptian fic. Baka and aibou don't fit into the time line.

Other than that, this story is great!
person reygurl
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwww!!!how cute thank you!!!!!=]
person dragonlady222
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. They have Dakuso frustrated and his guards aren't very happy with him.
This is really great.
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DID YOU JUST DARE TO CHALLENGE ME!??? BAKURA! MARIK! FREDDIE! ATTAAAAAAACCCCKKKK!!!!!!!

Rayemoon: *hides behind plotbunnies*

Pathetic

Rayemoon: never. underestimate. plotbunnies Ishtar. PLOTBUNNIES ATTAAAAAAAAAAACCCCKKKKK!!!

*smirks* I like your style RayeMoon...how about our Rivalary subsides...so we can use our powers against anzu Mizaki

person Koorime13
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Splendid, splendid, splendid!!! I'm glad that battle is over^^ I'm really hating Dakuso's guts by the second! >_<# But we can only wait and dream about what your next chappy'll be like^^ Can't wait!!!
Ja ne
person SpufFan
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok I'll admit, it was a good long chapter, but not nearly enough Yami/Yugi-ness! But keep up the great writing, cuz I know youw won't disappoint.
Oh and Sorry about the whole killing-thing, I just got caught up in the moment. *Shyly looks up through her bangs, with big pouty eyes*
person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the update and great timing for you cause this means I dont have to kill or at least torture you to insanity(JK btw)so instead I'll just keep it to bare faced threats *she summons a massive tsunami*I think you know the drill update asap or you get to see first hand what its like to have a water logged room hehe jk again anyways keep up the absolutely WONDERFULLY beautiful work and update again asap or face the wrather of mother natures most largest element(strangely enough its not the most powerful though *shrugs*ah well lil miss nature just works in mysterious ways I guess)
person dragonlady222
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Now they are together. They need to get rid of Dakuso soon. Great chapter.
person REYGURL
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!THEY GOT TOGETHER!!!!!!FINALLY!!!!!!=D
person catti-dono
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH....just love a Set and Jou story...sighs...they are soo awesome...but then so is Atem and Yuugi...giggles happily....cannot wait for the next chapter....love you to pieces...catti