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for Don´t Let Go

by LeilaLogan

person dragonlady222
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I hope you continue it here.
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOWW!!!! fantastic..by the way...if you ever come across someone named "Mary Sue" be warned...she's a nasty one *has experience* fgantastic writing though!! update soon K?
person zoe
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start I cant wait to see more. Its rather sad that Atums mum had to die, heres hopeing the story gets happier
person inuyashanut
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
pls pls pls pls update soon
me like dis
person Dragon Kiana
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwww how awful...poor little Atemu, but i love the story so far ^_^....please continue...if you do i will give you lots and lots of hugs...btw where's Joey going to show up?