rate_review Reviews

This was a fantastic story!!!! Thank you so much for posting it!!!!!! I really loved it!!!!

GREAT ENDING NOW DO A SEQUEL OR DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!! WAIT THE LOWS ARE COMING THE LOWS ARE COMIING!!! 8watches marik and Bakura make out8 and ignore me

Freddie: has she taken her medication?

Seth: Doubt it

Seto: She never does *looks at Freddie and snickers* Virgin *laughs*

Freddie: *cries*

falls to knees, slams forehead to floor chanting "We're not worthy, we're not worthy to have read a f@#king awesome story with a fruitful lemon at end"...loved the story...just remember Jou and Seth like it a little rough...*winks*....off to Hold On....YEAH....*skips away*...catti

Great chapter. I hope you can do the other lemon. I know you can since you did such a good job with your first one.

Awww... I really loved this story all the way through. I can't wait for the concluding chapter too! Will both couples have there own individual lemons in that chapter? ^^

On one side I'm so happy everything's ok... on the other side I'm so sad you're making this story come to an end... WHY?!! T_T
LOLZ xD
Anywho, the long awaited lemon is up next ^_~ Sugoi!! Can't wait! Lolz... that might've come out wrong ^^; Ma ikka...
Interesting how things have turned out. In the beginning it was all about meeting new people and sneaking out of the castle to crawling through the dessert then Tea dying (hahaha) *sigh* He's finally dead!! :@ Bwahahaha the long awaited death. You should've tortured him more!! Maybe shackle him up and slowly castrate him ^_^ gods, i crack myself up!! Anywho, keep up da gr8 work, ne!!

Ja ne


(ps: i forgot to ask in that other review wut a Fugle is ^^;)

OOOOOOOO nice set up for major Yami/Yugi-ness! A little low on the Love-drama, but I know you'll make it up to me with some lovin'. Meaning the characters, Silly!
Also sorry for missin on the past two reviews. Finals suck!
Much luv! Keep up the good work!

AWEESOOOOMKMMMMMMEEEEE

Dude you have bebo?? add me lol!!! I'm a bebo freak

Marik: *sweatdrop*

Bakura: *whispers* walk away and pretend you don't know her

FREDDIE!! YOU KNOW ME!!

Freddie: Excuse me Gentlemen...do you know who this wirdo is?

Bakura and Marik: *double take*

Bakura: WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU???

Marik: AND WHAT THE HELL HAVE YOU DONE WITH KREUGS????!!

*all look at Millie*

What!!!???? What did I do *hides manners potion*

Marik:...please tell me that doesn't last forever....

It's doesn't last forever???

*Bakura and Marik* GET HER!!!

Freddie: that's it lads...Charge!!

*flies away up high into the Clouds*

hey its called the power of a creative liscence what cant that intuitive mind of yours not come up with other ways to write without your hands tsk tsk you dissapoint me Moondalian jk btw great work yay ding dong the mage is dead the mage is dead and good riddance now this just leaves the repair job and boy what a job that will be stupid phsyco makes Marik look like florence nightngale wich one has to wonder is that a good thing or not O.o ah well keep up the great work and update asap JA NE

I'm glad he's dead. Yuugi and Jou were a big help to them.
I hope they can settle the war without problems the laws shouldn't be any big deal.
Good chapter.