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for A Week with Seto and Jounochi

by UrsurlaFretz

person zoe
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! That was cute! I think your a great writer! Woot lemon seen! I <3 puppyshipping
person catti-dono
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story....I knew Kaiba was getting abused by the asshole that adopted him....maybe Ill have to read the manga....because I also heard that Jou died in Battle City...but right now deep into FAKE and Fruits Basket...haahaa....going on to reading part2 of Thursday...catti
person catti-dono
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh....electric kisses....ahhh...never been kissed like that...I will be dead before that ever happens...sighs...love the story...still like you have the POVs and how they correspond so well with each other...nice set up....like to see this written with Yugi and Yami....that would be fun...soooo looking forward to chapt 8 and the lemon scene...guy on guy is soooo hot....catti
person Zoe
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! It was otogi's place! Well this chapter was still good. Im sure it was the extra POV that caused the LITTLE tension in the flow. But i still love it cause of kaiba and sweety puppy jou >_< aw! Please update soon! Hugs!!!!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude...I hate Anzu I would have killed or threatned you..one of the two yes so anyway..update soon!!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to a take a wild guess...he's either at Mizaki's house although I hope he don't catch rabis or something gross...or at Honda's or even in a random hotelly typey thingy or at otogi's or...at Yugi's I have no idea actually...ok buh-bye nows
person setoxkatsuya forever
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story plz update soon!!!!!!
person Zoe
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jou is in a special place where he has a shrain of seto that no one knows about. Am i right? Please finish so i know im right.
person catti-dono
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm....how about the attic at the Kame Game Shop?...Poor Jou, his father is such a bastard...Ive seen the series and there is no mention of his father beating him...I wonder if this came out of the mangas?...Great story...Im so glad that you are continuing it despite the wanted reviews....catti
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!! update soon please!!