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for To Keep A Katsu

by MizumiBlu

person Anon
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seto- -__- that's not how it happened, sheesh
jou- *shrugh* let de writer be, sheesh
me- ^-^ up, there's already a lot of kick @$$ stuff comming up, I can feel it
Shizuka- like the clip seto?
seto- >> go to hell b****
me- OMG, foul! DO IT AGAIN!
shizuka- bwahahahahahahah
me- >> time to break out that frying pan
shizuka- *grabs frying pan instead*
seto- we're all gonna die
jou- naww..she wouldn't do dat
shizuka- *takes a swing and misses seto's head*
seto- OMG, ><, *kicks jou*
jou- OW what was dat for!?
seto- for telling me you're going to leave and then putting us in a LEMON! AND! falsly accusing her!
me- *drooling* i liked the lemon *huggles seto*
seto- Xp that wasn't part of the conversation
me- XD woo hoo lemons! mmmmn, poor seto. GET JOU BACK! well, dur of course it wasn't
seto- duh it wasn't, and dur i'm planning on it!
me- OH YEAH! WOO HOO!
person Annya
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI!
i really enjoy read this story,please continue, i can't believe i don't see this sequel before (I had to read all at once XD). Evil and twisted Shizuka, i think i don't read it before,but i liked.Poor Jou and Seto, lease join them again.
Now I'll keep reading.
Up date soon, please.
Bye and good luck!
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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person anessa
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the end was hilarious but what a TWIST OMG! he still gets the girl...ahem *cough cough* I mean boy...but still gets to go back to NYC that officially SUCKS in big bold black and white letters, but I really liked this fanfic a lot, it has so much emotions, without really having to say it, it's funny I mean jesus fucking christ! I stayed up until 1:52am reading this really great awesomely awesome fanfic, update soon! and the chapter title is a poem on it's own! I've never seen anyone do that before as I said and 'm saying it again update soon :)[anessavanella@aim.com]
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*kisses Mr. Sharp and Pionty* Yes my pweetty knife...*turrns to author* Me Psycho?...Of course I'm a freakin Psycho! Would a normal person do this? *turns to Marik* Hey Marik you're an idiot and a brainless half-wit with no life *grins*

Marik:........You're an idiot Ishtar Motou...I swear if we wearn't friends I would've killed you by now!

Me: I know!! *to author* Yes I love you too...no matter how many times I threaten to kill you...you write briilaint even with your hands chained XDD *cough* anyway...you know the drill...update or die!
person hell_lot23
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh heh.....So, she's finally going to feel the wrath of Kaiba eh?...heh heh heh....

Kaiba, my dear, kill her with all your might.
Kaiba: It would be my plesure...
Good....Jericho, make sure she updates.

Jericho: *nods* *points cattle prod at you* Master hell_lot loves your story, so if you don't update he will be oh so sad. So I would suggest that it happens. *evil smirk* We wouldn't want anything bad to happen, would we?

Kaiba: Stop threating her and help me destroy Shizuka!
Jericho: Pfft. Fine.

See ya later. I love it lots!
person Velvetina
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated *Dance* I'm so glad that you updated today, I was so worried I'd miss it. I've gotta go have an operation so please update Sunday to make the day I come home again perfect. Pwease!!! *Puppy eyes*

Heh, I'm glad that you smile too. Everyone should have a smile on their face *Chibi-Grin* And it sucks that life is being mean to you. I wish there was something I could do for you. *Smooch back* I love ya too.

Lol, Yes definatly. Jou sticks to being seme and Seto is the intelligent one. Its a perfect plan...LOL. Hmmm, I do agree that it may be time for Seto to really kick some ass and have a proper payback moment. *Snug* I'm confident that you'll come up with the perfect plan.

Ah well, luckily we don't see too much of Shizuka...we'll just have to ignore her. Though the idea of Honda and Otogi fighting over her now amuses me endlessly.

Still...yay Kaiba had a hissy fit!! *Grins* I know under the circumstances I shouldn't be happy about it but I do love the way Seto looks when he loses his temper. *Giggle* I'm weird. Also how cocky is Jou? He goes to tell his lover that he's leaving him and still expects Seto to sleep with him peacefully...I mean it was very hot and Seto did put up a good fight but still...*Shakes head* That got me kinda angry with Jou.

I knew it had to be from her movie. It just had to be. Conniving little witch. Gah, I hope she does end up dead. *Growls*...like I said she's really bugged me!

Until next time!
xx

person girlo
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My poor baby!!! I want to coddle him and tell him everything will be alright. Whisper sweet nothings in his ear and so on. But alas, he is a cartoon, so my heart will go out for him, and i'll eat chocolate to help sooth his wounds. i'm not sure if it'll help him at all, but it'll make me feel better, and isn't that what's really important? I'll stick with you through all the twists and turns my friend. I'm like a fly in a web and you the masterful spider. Please don't eat me.
person anessa
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you have a sex scene! *glomps* I really liked this chapter even though, it was a whole lotta flashbacks but it's alright:) I always find seto impaling himself on jou's dick was HOTT. whatelse...oh and update soon!:)
person anessa
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry I was supposed to put this in, relationships are not worth having, when you know your going to be hurt or really happy, but you need experience to learn important life lessons