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What can I say, this is a great chapter. I'm glad that that bitch got what's coming to her but its not enough. She should suffer for what she did. Great twist having her step-father save Seto. Loved it. This girl is sick, and Joey not caring if she lives or dies. That was great. Now what is wrong with Seto. Is he pregnant. How will everyone get out of this mess. I know you said last chapter but you have a lot of loose ends to tie up. So you had better update soon.

Yes I do think you could pull it off *squeals* I love it when you have him say "I'm Kaiba Motherfuckin' Seto" hehe.... That was quite climatic! But well done! Hurry up with the next chapter!

Urgh, I'm sorry to have worried you. I was doing a bit better but the past few day's I've just totally crashed and felt ill and am in quite a bit of pain. I've missed you too *Hug*

This was a couple of very interesting chapters. Seto is such a great guy that you cannot help but love him? The emotion he displays for Jou is really, really heartwarming. More so than what he shows for Mokuba but Jou is someone outside of his 'family', an unknown factor. I have to say that I am pretty glad to see that Shizuka is dead, there really was no hope for that girl. And it was sweet the way that Jou ended up comforting Seto at the end even though you would have thought Jou would be more traumatised, I just love this couple.

Last chapter next. *Pout* But I don't want it to end! Oh well, I hope that its up soon even if it is the last one.

Eh, sorry I'm not as bubbely today but I'm feeling a bit...bleh.

Love ya, x

Forgot one thing. I dont mine mpreg if it is done right. I have read a lot of them with Jou being pregnant but only one with Seto and they only did it briefly. To have a whole story around him pregnant would be great. Remember you got to do it right. I still love these stories and I have put them in my personel library. So update soon so sequel can be written.

She's dead! She's dead! SHE'S FINALLY DEAD!!! YAY!!! And Joey and Seto are finally back together, absolutely wonderful! I love this story, I can't wait for the sequel; I'm as excited for the sequel as I am for the last chapter! You left me hanging for so long, but the ending to this chapter was perfect. I remember I asked you a question about M-preg. and you said that it was one of your favorite topics; well, I have an account on FanFiction.net and I made a few Joey/Seto stories, including M-preg.; hopefully you'll find some time to swing by there and read my stories (this offer is extended to everyone who is curious also). I'll be waiting for the next awesome chapter to this wonderful story; till then, keep writing, and update sooner, PLEASE!!!

Well, you're right when you said that I was sad and angry... but just a little... somethings don't like me in fics. As I mentioned, this must finish in the perfect way and I aprove everything in the new chapter...

n_n

Now I'm happy

Great job, this chapter was excellent, Seto sounded so cool kicking people's butts. Keep up the good work and update soon.

Mr. Sharp and Pointy would like a word

Mr. Sharp and Pointy: I love Millie because like all good daggers they stay close to their Masters and I don't think it is wise to try and yell at a psycho with a dagger...especially when this dagger has a personality and a mind of her own *carefully nuzzles Millie* anyway..that's my warning...

Seto Kaiba: You cannot kill me off because I'd sue you...then you'd be in debt...I doubt your worthless life has any merrit or meaning...And if you kill off joey I'll sue you double that amount

Marik: *is too busy killing small animals*

Bakura: *is too busy stealing stuff*

Me: Well...You'd better update soon...don't forget update or suffer the wrath of the psycho's oh did i mention Shuzika is with me? *smirk while pulls on the the chain* And I think I'll grab the cell phone and call the Psycho's...I feel like having a Psycho party...you're ivited!! *smirk*

Thank you for killing her, I didn’t even want to see her in a mental institution after all the shit she pulled Jou and Seto through. And Mr. Summers, yay for him and his intervention :) Didn’t do much throughout the story but got into action right when he was needed. Girl, you didn’t just deliver, you rocked! I’m now considering raising a monument for you *nods, nods*

Mpreg huh? The trouble with mpreg is making it seem ‘possible’ but, it has been done, so I don’t see why you couldn’t pull it off. Besides, just the thought of a pampered pregnant Seto make me giggle, if he’s eating chocolate now, what will happened when he’s well into pregnancy?. I’m sure he’d be pissed to be called the ‘wife’ in the relationship, though that makes for great humor. And Uncle Mokie! Mokuba would make such a great uncle, I bet he’d be overjoyed with just the idea, and then daddy Jou would talk to the his angel’s tummy and, and… *continues rambling for several minutes* Kawai! I’m exited about it already! And I’m so happy there’s going to be a stalker in the future, but now I’m worried that he’ll hurt the baby *worries, worries* I can’t wait to see what you come up with, but for now I’m going to patiently wait for the last chapter of this bit of the saga, hoping to read lot’s of smut >X3 Great job, keep the good stuff coming!

Note: One last thing, Mokuba and mother Miki should really meet. Also, I wonder what her take on Shizuka’s death will be?

Oops, firsr bit of the review said:
Squishy- squashy Shizuka is no more! *throws confetti while dancing around in circles*
My copy/paste can use some help ¬_¬