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for To Keep A Katsu

by MizumiBlu

person Velvetina
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Huggles* I'm doing a lot better now honey! Don't be sad, smile for me!! I promise not to make you worry again.

More fic's more fics more fics are heading my way! *Sings* YAY. I'm so glad that you are full of ideas its good for you and me, what could be better lol.

*Ponders* Seto's pregnant isn't he? He's gotta be, all of the clues are there. Bwahahaha, Jou's gonna have to deal with a hormonal Kaiba...that I wanna see!

Haha, Shizkua is finally dead. What does it take to kill her honestly! O.o! But that aside it was a very cute chappie with Philip and our boy's sweetness (FUCKING!...Shhh) at the end. Mmm, I love cheesecake and really want a bit now. I must go on a hunt for the mysterious cheescake.

*Scratches head* Not so much a comeback as a 'why not' moment. Though I've never been that popular here on aff.net lol. Oh well. Your watching me? Eep! heh

person Anon
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great ending!
person LadyVirgo91656
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just found your name on little dragon. If no one has welcomed you just let me say welcome. There is a lot of great writers in this group and would enjoy your stories. You might want to think about posting them to the list. There is also another group that is solely Seto/Jou you might consider joining as well. It is called A Dragon's Lair. They also have a lot of great writers as well. Hope to see you in the group postings.
person LadyVirgo91656
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter, fantastic story. Sequel please. You took that one scene with Shizuka right out of Halloween. One of my favorite horror movies. Loved it how Jou got her in the end. To get a real good feel on Mpreg read these two stories 'Project Destiny' and 'It Started With Snow'. These are real good stories dealing with the subject. There is also one on little dragon called 'The XX Factor' that deals with it as well. Will be looking for your stories. So post soon.
person girlo
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
with an ending like that, you'd better beleive I'll be back with you for the next story. Colour me your number one fan (provided the spot hasn't already been taken, in which case colour me the highest number I can get.) I'm glad you enjoyed my reveiws, cause I sure enjoyed your stories. Keep up the awesome work!
person jess
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nasty!!!!!! seto go barf barf. yay fic is done and i can't wait till the next one. put it up soon
person O.O
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*gapes*oh.my.fucking.god *stares at screen* OH.MY.FUCKING.GOD!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! Thats the best cliff hanger I've EVER seen!!! jesus christ! I'm so SPEECHLESS!!! O.O I just can't believe it!!! SETO IS PREGNANT!!!!! WOOOOOTZ!!!

*glomps* I can't stop smiling!! I LOVE MPREG!!! AHHHHHHHHHH!!! I'M SO HAPPY!!! *giggles insanely* when i read this story, i never expected it to take such a sudden twist!!! >.< I'm and like, SOOOOOOOO beyond satisfied right now...I'm in heaven! *floats on cloud*

I'm tryna think of a new name i should go by..hmmm...maybe hitori..or maybe gaki...I dunno.

heh, and I'd love to read your two stories! i know one will be a contintuation of this one, but i can't wait to see what the plot is on the other one! *winks*

*smiles and winks* i'll tty next time! ^-^

person SilverYaoiHellion
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! It ended!!! And, Serenity, hopefully, is dead once and for all! And, please tell me Seto is pregnant and that Joey will hopefully propose to him in the next story! Please, try to post up the next story soon; very soon, because I can't wait to hear more! This was an awesome joyride of a story and I hope that your excitement in this story carries on to your other stories. Till then, I'll be waiting!
person Shadow2007
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O' She didnt die! OMG! o well she's dead now >:D YIPEEE I cant WAIT until your next story! This Fic was so awesome, and so was To kill a Kaiba btw!


P.S."make yourself known!" what does that mean :P it was in your response to my review but i didnt follow :P.
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me- omg that was awsome!!!!!!! *glomps*
seto- mnnn *drools over lemon*
jou- *same as well*
me- i know something you don't know
seto- ?
jou- wa?
me- and i'm not telling! bwahahaha
seto- oh god, she went insain
jou- eh at least serenity's dead
seto- yeah bout time
me- damn strait mother trucker
seto- >>
jou- anyway, what do ya know
me- has something to do with him being sick, and er probably the chocolate
jou- yeah ya gotta stop w/de chocolate set
set- *growls at jou* my chocolate
jou- O_O
me- ahaahahah can't wait till the next one, until then owari