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I laughed so hard in the fifth chatper! Please you have to update soon, I can't wait to see what happens.

bwahahaha GO MOKIE GO MOKIE!

and for ROUND TWO OF LETS GET READY TO RUMBLE!

Seto- *takes a swing at shizuka* *OH BUT MISSES!*
Shizuka- hahahha stupid kaiba stay away from my brother freak!
jou- O.O now dat's not nice, it's alright angel she didn't mean it
shizuka- the hell i didn't!
moki- *whispering* bro tag me!
Seto- *quickly tags moki*
me- (announcing) OMG, it's the DOUBLE KIABA ATTACK! oooooooooooo! that one had to hurt, let's see that in instant replay
(shizuka getting hit by both kaiba's at top speed)
me- that had to hurt! *ding* and there's the bell, to your corners!
Anzu- why didn't you tag me!?
shizuka- oh shut up! *bleeding*
me- *silently giggling* XD

AAAAAAAhhhhhahahahahahahahah! That was so good i can't for the next choas!!!!!!

Seto better play the game better cuz he can't lose Katsuya to that bitch of a sister. Seto must win.

Bitch, bitch, bitch!!!! How can she make poor Seto sad?! I suggest we kill her…nah forget it, it’s just my over protectiveness over the CEO talking. The worst thing was that, unintentionally and without knowing it, Joey did contribute to that sadness <:( Still, a Kaiba ain’t a quitter, watch out Shizuka! Also I totally ADORE Mother Miki X3 I hope she appears again in this fic at some point. Great job, keep the good stuff coming!

Still, a Kaiba ain’t a quitter, watch out Shizuka! Also I totally ADORE Mother Miki X3 I hope she appears again in this fic at some point. Great job, keep the good stuff coming!

Note: Damn AFF.net, ate my review twice!

OOOO that's a bit stupid to threaten our Seto he would hell kick her ASS! I must admit I do feel a bit sorry for Tea I actually don't mind her that much, everyone seems to think that she goes on about friendship heaps but I find that the entire cast goes on about it heaps not just Tea. Yes I do admit that it is an interesting twist to have a sibling relationship conflict with a romantic one as I was expecting it to be that someone was trying to steal Jou away for a romantic relationship and not a sibling one

BWAAHAHAHAHAH!
Seto- *standing in middle of ring*! YEAH! OH YEAH BOO YA!
Shizuka- @_@..........x-x
Jou- .....o.O I dun really get it
me- ^-^ baka inu
Jou- I AINT NO DAMN BIRD!

Uh Oh!!! If that little brat of a sister isn't enough, you're going to bring in an obsessed bitch?! I wonder if Mokuba is strong enough physically and emotionally, especially emotionally to help out his big brother? And, the death threat, will that come into play? Other than all of that, this story is going on great! Please update soon!!!

Awww, I'm so glad that your plans are falling into place and that you feel comfertable that people are going to like what you do. I know the uncertainty is so nerve-wracking...its why I don't really show my work anymore lol. And, yeah I though it important to mention the other cause its so easy to get bogged down with the 'main' characters and miss those other extra delights!

Oooh, I get the feeling the Kaiba bros are gonna kick some serious ass *dance* I love it when Mokie gets sneaky along side Seto, they are such a great team! Heh, Shizuka won't know whats hit her...gah little wench already 'innocently' suggesting Jou go to New York. Hah, my ass would Jou leave Seto like that. *Grin* I love my boys...and also yay for Seto munching on cookies what a cute image!