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OOO I have a feeling that was not a good move Mokuba things will probably get real ugly! As I have said before Shizuka really really nnoys me I never liked her for some reason! But yeah anyway liked this chapter update real soon OR ELSE!!!! Anyway mahap ye will put in some lemony goodness?

*Squeals as is glomped* Hehe, how could I say no after you responded so delightfully?! I'll send it to you soon, I promise.

Yay! Long fic, I love you! I'm enjoying this so much but gosh I cannot wait to see what Jou's gonna do. Still in the meantine I'm going to be enjoying the mayham that was introduced in this chapter *evil laugh* Gods I loved seeing Shizuka get hers...the scene with Otogi was priceless though I am starting to get a little nervous about how fond I'm getting of the Dice master *grin*

Seto and Jou are just too cute!! *Bounces* Seriously, Jou teaching Seto how to skate...AWWWWW. Very, very adorable. And this kiss at the end was perfect.

I love Mokuba. Pure and simple. Such a devious mind in such a sweet looking package. How can somebody not love him?! Hehe

xx

Okay... wow, Shizuka is REALLY different from how she is in the show. I mean... she's acting like a lunatic. (Or like someone else. That would be freaky if she WAS someone who ISN'T Shizuka.)

I'm interested in how she became like she is in your story, since it looks like she wasn't like that in the past. (Maybe a good explanation so that it's not just character bashing.) Also, I'd like to see Tea get a happy ending, since I feel bad for her being used by Shizuka. (And to see her and Yuugi become friends again... It would suck if they became enemies, since Tea makes a lousy enemy.) I'd be sad to see her just end up alone and bitter over all of this. And have Shizuka get what she deserves... honestly, she's acting like a brat. Or the green eyed monster. Hey! She has green eyes!

YES!!! This chapter went so much better than I thought it would, it was so funny!!! I loved the way Mokuba protected his big brother from that little mean bitch; I still can't believe what she did to Seto in the beginning of the chapter though. This story is going along wonderfully, I'm already hoping that there would be a sequel, but of course I have to wait to see how this awesome story turns out. I'll be waiting for the next chapter; I already know it's going to be great, but till then, I'll be waiting.

Glad to be the new kid on the block for now. I like the fact that the Kaiba brothers seem to have stronger family ties and love for each other then Joey and Serenity (Sorry for the english names but i can't spell the japanese ones) And HELLS YEAH SEMEN IS THICKER THEN BLOOD!!! I can't wait for the roller rink update soon!!!

man, i enjoy this story so much, and the one before it too. I can't wait for roller skating, how can that not be great?

*Glomps* Course I'm going to be loyal to a wonderful fic like this and a sweetie of an author! Urm, it was actually just a little while ago that I last wrote something but I only posted it in one place. I don't write as much as often but if you want to read something of mine I'll be happy to email it to you if you'd like?

Yay for the evil sister slapping Mokie...he is so cute when he's being 'evil' *giggle* I can see the grin on his face. If I was going to have a brother I'd want Mokuba...well I'd like Kaiba as a brother but then comes the danger of me jumping him which would be a bit icky lol.

Ooh, though I know I should be on the 'girls' side, I had to have a small cheer for Tea's insult to Otogi. I mean I love the guy but he is just a bit insane and he did have Honda to kiss him better.

Ooh Ryou's being extra intuitive...I wouldn't want to piss that boy off, after all think who he was in a former life!

Hmm, it all seems to be going well so far though I do have to wonder how will Jou choose between his beloved sister and his sexy boyfriend. Hard choice if he doesn;t know what's happening.

OOOO you so need to Shizuka get totally shocked and pissed when she finds out that Honda and Otogi are a couple (if she doesn't already) cause she thought and wanted them to fawn all over her. But anyway update soon please! Out of curiosity are you planning to do a sequel after this? Make it a series DAMN YOU! (he I'm so charming ^-^)

Adorable, huggable, lovable Mokie! I want to squeeze him and pamper him till the day I die, he’s soooooo cute! And a smart little scheming devil too >:3 I can’t wait to see what hell he puts ‘the bitch’ through *evil cackle*. And Seto and the labrador toy gave me sugar high, that was so sweet! ^.^ Now one thing is for sure, poor Tea. I think she’s just frustrated with her un-required love, and it's sad she’s being manipulated because of those feelings. Hell, I’m not even a Tea fan and I feel for her.
So I hit the spot with my last review? *huff chest proudly* I feel so good about myself right now, my ego is soaring :) Great job with this, can’t wait for more, keep the good stuff coming please!

Go Mokuba! Go!!! I can't wait to see what happens to Serentiy! I hope that her plan doesn't fall through at the skating ring because I want to see her in as much pain as possible when they get there!!! I love this story, I love the quick updates; please update ASAP!!!