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shizuka- *evily makes seto sick!* bwahaha
Seto- @____@ x-x
Jou- NOOOOO! MAH ANGEL!
Shizuka- NO YOU WILL BE FINE AGAIN!
Jou- *growling* DIE! *beats shizuka to a bloody pulp himself* XD

me: OMG SETO NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! EVIL EVIL SHIZUKA!

Sorry the lemon was good but if anything about Battle Royale comes up or reminds me of it I go off inot gah gah land aaaahhhh Masanobu Ando is HOT! Ahhhhhhhh it's a book and movie by the way anyway OHNO poor Seto how is Shizuka gonna get herself out of this one? (Not that I want her to) but surely you won't have Jou find out about her this early in the fic! Oh, are you going to have some sickly sweet fluff between Jou and Seto with him nursing Seto and stuff? Have some sickly sweet stuff ^_^

*growling* I'm going to kill that bitch!!! I can't believe she'd try to do that!!! Anyway I love it you have to add more soon!! I flippen HATE cliff hangers!!! *pouts*

What, what, WHAT?! Fucking loon! It hasn’t even been a day since her last murder attempt! Poor Seto, I’m so worried about him T_T At least the positive side is that he has the gang on his side, since it hasn’t escaped Otogi’s watchful eye that that bitch is no good. Also, I have faith that Tea will probably come to her senses and corroborate on the fact that Shizuka y ready for the mental institution (that is, if the brunet doesn’t get killed in the process ¬_¬). I also hope Joey sees his sister trying to kill his angel, but I’m sure ~something~ will happen in between in order for her to escape the situation (which will frustrate me for sure but a plot is a plot). God, I love your fics, I can’t wait for next chapter, please update soon!

Hey!!! I'm so happy, yet disappointed!!! Don't get me wrong, the story, as beautiful as ever, even in such life threatening situations; but the update wasn't as quick as the other was, I would've loved to read this chapter sooner! I can't believe how far that bitch is willing to go to do something that will make her brother miserable! Back to that woman at the party that Seto was at, I had a feeling that she was Serenity, but I forgot to mention anything about her in my last review. Does Serenity have an alter-ego like Seto, or is the insaneness all her? Plus, I want a happy ending for our beautiful couple, so I hope you don't do anything too drastic; though I still want Serenity to die!!! Please update soon, I need to read this story, my life depends on it!!!

Such a bitch! What's her problem? If she truly loves her brother then she would want to see him happy. She's got a lot of explaining to do when she gets caught. I'm just glad everyone will be there to help Jou. So update soon I want to see her get out of this mess. I hope Jou see her for what she is very soon. And Seto willing to give up everything for him now that's love.

oh jesus...at first i thought you killed seto!! was was like "OMFG SHE OFFED SETO!!!"

and i HOPE jou fines out what the "nurse" is doing to!! cause that is FUCKED UP! i never knew anybody to take promises like that to the extreme! Jou seriously needs so slap her with his "bitch hand" grr...

Bitch has to go now. No one gets near Kaiba with anything dangerous and deadly unless its Katsuya. Bitch just has to go. I don't care if Katsuya or Yugi throw her out the window. Why yugi you ask? Because it's simple no one else would expect it and the police would never convict him of throwing her off the Kaiba Corp. Buildings then running her over with an 18 wheeler, Big Mother Trucker Truck (Don't own) then lighting her on fire. But anyway awsome chaper can't wait till you update again. Can't wait to read again...

Bleak? BLEAK!?! my emotions can't take much more of this wild rollercoster of a stor, but my mind says i must know how it ends. so I'll read on. I hope everyone gets what they deserve, or I may have to track you down...

Oh no! I didn’t get to review chapter 7! I feel awful, like the worst scum on the planet, I’m so sorry!!! T_T It’s just that I’ve been a bit busy lately. I did adore the chapter though, I’m raising and altar for Mokuba at this very instant >:3 Made that bitch’s life miserable, and the 2 dollar part was hilarious, lol. And Seto was able to get to kiss and cuddle with Jou, I’m so happy. I also found it endearing that Kaiba didn’t know how to skate, and the reason behind it was very plausible and original. Great work my dear, and sorry again for the belated review :(