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for To Keep A Katsu

by MizumiBlu

person hell_lot23
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is sure getting heated! I can't wait for the next chappie! Please update soon.
person LadyVirgo91656
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a way to find out. Poor Joey, I hope this revelation doesn't destroy him. The scene with Joey giving Seto some special attention was funny. So please update soon. I don't know how you're going to resolve this but please keep Seto and Joey together.
person SilverYaoiHellion
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU!!! Like a sister of course! (or a brother?) Anyway, awesome, beautiful, fantastic, amazing story so far!!! To me there isn't enough words to explain how good this story is; I wish you had more reviews, this story is just so good!!! That insane wench is finally discovered; and Joey finally knows, it took him so long! I'm glad that this story will turn out good; but I'm still wondering how it will get to that point. Plus, I was also wondering; what do you think about male pregnancy (M-preg.)? I can't wait for the next chapter; I'll try my best to be more patient, I sort of understand about the school thing you're going through...
person Drachenaugen
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this! You managed what I thought impossible: telling Jou who the attacker was without Seto doing it directly, but without him finding out from someone else. Not only that but we also have Otogi and Yugi as walking proof of the bitch’s madness. I’m betting those two will talk some sense into Tea if she doesn’t come to her senses on her own. I’m so happy. Now one thing is for sure, pure Seto for two reasons: 1) He’s terrified *hugs* 2) He’s embarrassed to death XD And Mokie had a pretty original way of reacting to his brothers predicament lol. One thing though, make sure to check one sentence, cause I think you mixed up with words and it ends up sounding like incest (Sighing, Mokuba looks again to the questing eyes of his boyfriend’s lover. ‘Well, you see…”). My dear, this is wonderful, great job, keep the good stuff coming please!!!!
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay!!
person O.O
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you know..this story keeps getting better and better...i think its because of the cliff hangers!!!

NOW will jou put the slap down on shizuka?!?! i don't give a damn if they are sibling! my blother and i still have fights and I'M 23!!!

tty next time! please update soon!
person Velvetina
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, so sorry I'm late in reviewing but real life is just a bitch to be honest.

I'm glad you liked my story. Yea I thought the combination of them and food was a fairly good one...and it seemed plausible for it to be Jou's fetish. *Blush* Urgh...I'm not sending any of my really old stuff...its awful, though maybe there is one...and also theres another drabble that is sorta related but not *grin* confusing I know.

OMFG....Shizuka tried to...and then Jou came in to....and then Jou...and then Mokuba banana...then nightmare Seto yell....ARGH. Those poor poor guys. Seto cause he's worried and Jou because...well just because. I mean woah. Its excellent and I need more. What happens next? darn you and your cliffhangers (And yes despite that I do still love you hehe) Hehe, Shizuka was finally properly caught out though! Yes for the boys!

Love Velvetina x
person girlo
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so maybe i overreacted a little on the whole "hunting you down"' thing, but i get really into stories. Anywho, isn't sleep talking the most useful plot device ever? I use it all the time. It just makes things so fun, cause the sleeper doesn't know what they said. good times. keep writing
person Shadow2007
schedule August 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dun Dun Dun..... Ahh my favorite drama :D Shizuka is a BITCH O.o kill her please ^_^, as for Jou it's not like its a real hard choice. A. Insane Sister B. Smexy Lover
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BWAAHAHA!

Seto- *hits shizuka hard* TAKE THAT!
Jou- now angel dun hert her......too much
Shizuka- OW! T_T kat-chan help me!
Jou- XP no!