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Good lord!!! The girl's plan has so many plot holes it's not even funny; first it was her stupidity for even thinking of it, then it was Mokuba, now it was her own movie!!! I can't wait till the next chapter; this time I'm just praying it's not that long of a wait! Where the hell were you girl?! I thought you died!!!

BUSTED!!!!!!!! Seto's got her. Now what's he going to do? And who's on the phone. It had better be Jou. Seto loves his seme. I hope she gets exposed in more ways than one. Good actress or not that is one sick BITCH! Update soon.

Excellent chapter, you did very well with how the story played out, okay so Seto knows that Serenity has played him and Jou for fools, but who is this surprise visitor that he gets and what will he do about Jou? Please update soon and keep up the good work. By the way, your other plan for them in this chapter was great. I take my hat off to you.

*blushes and cries while trying to stop a nose bleed* OMG!! that was soo sad!! *bottom lip quivers* i really started crying when seto started begging for Jou to stay *sniff* hehe i'm ok..i really love drama and all that depressing stuff.

Then my sadness turned to anger when i saw Shizuka IN A FUCKING MOVIE!!! grrr, she shouldn't be in one living the good life while Jou and Seto are 'effin miserable. Do you know what she needs?! A 2 BY 4 TO THE FACE!!! I bet you anything that will fix it!!!

^-^ and thanks for the book comment heh...some people say i talk too much heh heh. thank for the chapter! it was uber great, as usual! please update soon!

8======D (__|__) lmao!

YAY! I feel lurved!

seto- you know...i'm going to kill you right jou?
jou- yeah
seto- and you're not going to tell me are you?
jou- ......no
seto- you suck

OMG....You cant make Joey leave Seto....that just wouldnt be fair...you have to update soon...I have to find out what Kaiba is going to do and Serenity....I would so love to smack her in the mouth...Joey cant go to New York, or have Kaiba stop him or something?


Seto Kaiba and Joey Wheeler forever!!!!!!

Samantha Kaiba

What?! What?! WHAT?! That is so unfair!!! It’s a simple equation: Jou stays with Seto = Love and happiness; Jou goes with Shizuka = blood shed. I’m sorry dear, a reader has to do what a reader has to do. On a brighter note, I’m so glad you passed 100 reviews! Yay! Hugs and chocolates for you!!! I love reading this, so you won’t be loosing this reviewer any time soon. By the way, have you ever though of writing a J/S stalker fic? A famous CEO could certainly have a nut or two interested in him, and seeing how you’ve more than demonstrated you can write about crazy people... of course with a certain jealous puppy there to help thing would probably be more than amusing. In any case, it’s just and idea, take it or leave it as you please. I just think that stalkers are interesting to read in fiction (not to deal with in real life though <:S). Well, another great chapter, keep the good stuff coming!

Full of rage and hate towards horrible sister. Maddening. Need sugar to calm down. plot twists rule and suck at the same time. GRRR

he's a dumbass sometimes..she's freakin crazy!

I knew you'd do that :( Oh poor little Seto hhhhhmmmmm are you going to have it so that when Jou comes back a couple of years later he finds out he has a kid to Seto? But anyway I'm still not happy with you!